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weepingnaiad November 7 2012, 15:42:18 UTC
Really lovely 'verse you created. I was heartbroken for the situation between Phil and Clint and then Natasha keeping her distance, breaking Clint's heart all the more. But he has more now. Such an utterly adorable family!

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thepretender501 November 10 2012, 20:42:14 UTC
AFJKSHD!!! OH BB!!! MY FEEELS!!

I'm going to try to make this relatively short and coherent. I'm not usually a fan of kids in fic but I knew from the snip-its you shared early on that I'd fall in love with Flip same way Clint has. I wasn't wrong! BB! OMG! She was so incredibly adorable. I loved the interaction of bb!Flip and big strong superheroes. I love that they were all terrified of hurting her. I think my favorite was Thor. I mean THOR OF ASGARD and teeny tiny Flip I flailed! Tony was great too, just so concerned in that Tony!way. I was so sad not to have as much Natasha but I appreciate it all being up front and honest between them. She basically opted out and I can't really blame her. I missed Steve and was so happy to see him show up in the end!

The build up and tension and relationship growth between Clint and Bruce, oh god, I'm in tears it was just so great. I loved that that was the focus of the story. Loved how they got close and then how Bruce pulled away and Clint had to go win him back. Agh!

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beanarie November 13 2012, 06:20:15 UTC
I adored this story. You wrote Clint's journey so well, from the idle thought of "I hope that one I saw in the canister didn't die" to the moment he became a parent to siblings. It was really well-written and heartfelt, yet kind of wry at the same time, just like I see Clint. My favorite was--apart from Tony being protective of Bruce because that was adorable--how Natasha had no desire to deal with Flip, ever, but for really good reason and Clint didn't blame her for it. Anyway, thank you for this. Your fic made my day.

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girlygothic November 20 2012, 18:20:42 UTC
This was wonderful! I'm normally very wary of any Avengers fics that have Phil die. (I know. How silly is that, getting annoyed when people follow canon.) But this one just sounded too intriguing. And it was so great! Clint stepping up. Bruce being scared. "Hulk smash baby?" All of them eventually figuring it out. Yaaayyyy!

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ivy_b January 20 2013, 19:34:55 UTC
Tis was beyond adorable. I loved your Clint voice, I loved the Clint/Bruce and their issues, Tony being his awesome self and Dummy babysitting! Then the little bit of Natasha, Thor and Steve and it was perfect.

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