FIC: (Lotrips) The Answer - Orli/Keira/Dom

Sep 29, 2003 09:25

TITLE: The Answer ( Read more... )

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well, just the ticket! sophrosyne31 September 29 2003, 10:15:51 UTC
O lovie, you did it! Congratulations, you have given birth to a bundle of red-hot lickable smut.

Such a plausible portrait of a menage a trois. The constantly shifting lines of alliegance and focus, the thrilling uncertainties of all those availabilities, all those body parts coming and going.

Too many fabulous lines to mention! Nice, nice. Dom's black eyes. Orli's kisses. The meticulous attention to whose arms and legs are where. Very visual and visualisable and O yeah, extremely hot.

As for Keira-Sue... well she's a girl, right? What else can a spunky slasher do except fervently identify? well, I couldn't help it, me.

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Re: well, just the ticket! cupiscent September 29 2003, 19:15:10 UTC
I know! I did it! Go me! *bounces*

I'm actually really delighted that you think it visual and visualisable, because that's always very hard for me to tell. I actually don't work through visualisation at all. I don't create mental pictures of things, not when writing, not when reading. Just not how I do it. I just work with words. So that's always an added bonus. Huzzah.

Also glad you think it plausible. I had moments, writing it, of "Jesus fuck, like this would ever happen like this". But, y'know, fiction. Whee. Fun times for all.

(Will send you email. Lunch or coffee or afternoon tea or something on Friday?)

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slashygood September 29 2003, 13:34:07 UTC
Wow. I loved how everything came full circle and how each segement flowed onto the next. And I really liked how the charcters interacted, they seemed so natural.

And of course: yay, hot three-way smut. :)

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cupiscent September 29 2003, 19:18:29 UTC
Hot three-way smut = yayOMGnnnngh. Yep. *g* There should be more of it.

Thank you so much. Delighted you enjoyed it.

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spiritkitty September 29 2003, 17:55:59 UTC
This is wonderful! Really quite lovely. I am a big fan of Dom/Orli/Kiera. I shall rec it in my lj, if that's all right. :)

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cupiscent September 29 2003, 19:49:35 UTC
Thank you, delighted you enjoyed it. And Dom/Orli/Keira... what's not to love, really. *g* I'd be flattered and honoured if you recced it.

Thanks again.

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swear_jar September 29 2003, 22:53:32 UTC
Oh my God HOLY CRAP... I... reallyreally need a cold shower... I mean, wow. This comment is no good. Incoherent. Sorry. GUH.

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cupiscent September 30 2003, 17:31:35 UTC
lol. Ta. Incoherence is its own unique brand of compliment, and I am delighted.

(reposting this comment to put it in the thread it should be in)

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shaenie September 30 2003, 06:40:47 UTC
*falls over, stunned*

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cupiscent September 30 2003, 17:33:52 UTC
*picks you back up, checks for bruises*

Mwah.

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