well, just the ticket!sophrosyne31September 29 2003, 10:15:51 UTC
O lovie, you did it! Congratulations, you have given birth to a bundle of red-hot lickable smut.
Such a plausible portrait of a menage a trois. The constantly shifting lines of alliegance and focus, the thrilling uncertainties of all those availabilities, all those body parts coming and going.
Too many fabulous lines to mention! Nice, nice. Dom's black eyes. Orli's kisses. The meticulous attention to whose arms and legs are where. Very visual and visualisable and O yeah, extremely hot.
As for Keira-Sue... well she's a girl, right? What else can a spunky slasher do except fervently identify? well, I couldn't help it, me.
Re: well, just the ticket!cupiscentSeptember 29 2003, 19:15:10 UTC
I know! I did it! Go me! *bounces*
I'm actually really delighted that you think it visual and visualisable, because that's always very hard for me to tell. I actually don't work through visualisation at all. I don't create mental pictures of things, not when writing, not when reading. Just not how I do it. I just work with words. So that's always an added bonus. Huzzah.
Also glad you think it plausible. I had moments, writing it, of "Jesus fuck, like this would ever happen like this". But, y'know, fiction. Whee. Fun times for all.
(Will send you email. Lunch or coffee or afternoon tea or something on Friday?)
Wow. I loved how everything came full circle and how each segement flowed onto the next. And I really liked how the charcters interacted, they seemed so natural.
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Such a plausible portrait of a menage a trois. The constantly shifting lines of alliegance and focus, the thrilling uncertainties of all those availabilities, all those body parts coming and going.
Too many fabulous lines to mention! Nice, nice. Dom's black eyes. Orli's kisses. The meticulous attention to whose arms and legs are where. Very visual and visualisable and O yeah, extremely hot.
As for Keira-Sue... well she's a girl, right? What else can a spunky slasher do except fervently identify? well, I couldn't help it, me.
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I'm actually really delighted that you think it visual and visualisable, because that's always very hard for me to tell. I actually don't work through visualisation at all. I don't create mental pictures of things, not when writing, not when reading. Just not how I do it. I just work with words. So that's always an added bonus. Huzzah.
Also glad you think it plausible. I had moments, writing it, of "Jesus fuck, like this would ever happen like this". But, y'know, fiction. Whee. Fun times for all.
(Will send you email. Lunch or coffee or afternoon tea or something on Friday?)
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And of course: yay, hot three-way smut. :)
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Thank you so much. Delighted you enjoyed it.
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Thanks again.
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Mwah.
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