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cruiscin_lan

FIC: Step Ball Change, Chapter One

Nov 07, 2009 15:37

Title: Step Ball Change (Chapter One)
Characters: Love quadrangle Rachel/Puck/Finn/Quinn, with Brittany and ensemble
Word Count: 1453
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: If I owned Glee then all proceeds would go to the Howard Bamboo Legal Defense Fund.
Spoilers/Warnings: Spoilers up to "Mash-Up."
Summary: Rachel, Puck, Finn, and Quinn try to sort out their ( Read more... )

character: rachel berry, character: noah puckerman, character: quinn fabray, rating: pg, character: jacob ben israel, step ball change, fanfiction, character: tina cohen-chang, character: finn hudson, character: kurt hummel, character: brittany the cheerio, fandom: glee

Comments 25

wily_one24 November 7 2009, 21:05:40 UTC

I want to steal this fic away and have debauched, illicit affairs with it under the cover of darkness.

This is awesome, beyond awesome.

That last scene is exactly how I want Finn to find out. Because... YES.

I would point out which parts I liked, but honestly I'd be rehashing the entire thing. I think you got all the characters down pat. I was a little sad not to see a passage from Quinn, but I understand (she's one of the hardest to empathise and write sympathetically, her motivations are so twisted and confused, she doesn't even know which way is up, let alone someone else).

Thank you for this! Now I need you to write more Glee fic, as soon as you possibly can.

cruiscin_lan November 7 2009, 21:10:51 UTC

Don't worry, there will be more Quinn in the next chapter. She's going to have to figure out which was is up sooner or later.

And now I ship Jacqui/fic. How very strange.

speccygeekgrrl November 7 2009, 21:37:02 UTC

Ooooh, this is exciting. :D It rings very true to the spirit of the show. I'm really interested to see where you're taking this!

cruiscin_lan November 8 2009, 15:37:00 UTC

Thanks, Dani :)

latexana November 7 2009, 22:47:56 UTC

oh god! more right? so good. I fucking love the ot4 in all its glory. Will there be any Rachel/Quinn? cause they are my favorite.

"Rachel is a really pretty name, he'd think. But hey, Quinn rhymes with Finn."
I laughed and laughed and laughed at that. Oh Finn and your sweet diminess.

cruiscin_lan November 8 2009, 15:37:34 UTC

More later today or tomorrow, thanks for reading :)

goldstar94 November 7 2009, 23:57:00 UTC

WOW.
This was incredible! I really hope that the actual show plays out like this, especially the way that Finn finds out about Quinn. I really loved the section about Ernest Hemingway!

cruiscin_lan November 8 2009, 15:39:31 UTC

Thanks!

rebelliousrose November 8 2009, 00:00:23 UTC

LOVE the ending. Love, love love the fact that Finn's more upset that she's had sex than that it wasn't with him.

I can't wait to see the next bit, when he actually starts processing.

Bravo!

cruiscin_lan November 8 2009, 15:42:27 UTC

Thanks for reading!