Hey, I enjoyed reading this very much, but I really don't want to critique it right now as I am under the influence of my pain meds. Though, I hope very much to read more of your work!!
Could you please title your subject line as follows:
Prose / phylosophy / did you lose your dreams in the rain? / projectmayhem57
This way I can index it into the memory bank. Thanks!! I'll index as soon as I hear from you that this is done!
Well, it's been ten hours since I've had any pain meds, I wanted to come back to this and re read it with a clear head. WOW!! I am so glad I did!!
Usually I pick out a few of my favorite sentences in a piece, but this . . .this is one beautiful sentence after another. This is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL piece. The word choice is beautiful, there is nothing cliche or pretentious about it.
Wow. I'm going to read this to Joe. I did read this to Joe. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us!
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Could you please title your subject line as follows:
Prose / phylosophy / did you lose your dreams in the rain? / projectmayhem57
This way I can index it into the memory bank.
Thanks!! I'll index as soon as I hear from you that this is done!
Keep up the good work,
BethAnna
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Usually I pick out a few of my favorite sentences in a piece, but this . . .this is one beautiful sentence after another. This is an absolutely BEAUTIFUL piece. The word choice is beautiful, there is nothing cliche or pretentious about it.
Wow. I'm going to read this to Joe.
I did read this to Joe. This is beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us!
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