Oh, there'll be lots of haunting. Tim's also wet, and possibly nekkid (though I left it out since I figured that those who really wanted to imagine him nekkid would do so regardless).
Kon doesn't think he's ever smelled so nice after coming out of one of those tanks. When Tim towels himself off afterwards, too groggy to make comments, he just glows.
That first one was very dark, and I enjoyed it. The second amused me too, but I gotta say I really enjoyed the third one most. I like seeing things through Kon's perspective :3
I know. It's easier to write from Kon's POV too. I should just do that next time I struggle with words.
I agree. The first was a cool idea, but I don't think it translated well to paper. I'd have to write the same thing a few dozen times before I find a version I like. The third one though...it just happened. I didn't think much of the thought, and the words just...whoa. Kon, come hang out with me. I need you for your uncertainties. ♥
Tim...Tim is very certain of himself. It makes for less art, I suppose.
Oh, man. These are ALL awesome, but I LOVE the middle one for the hilarity--BAT SHAMPOO! TOTALLY!--and that last one does a fantastic job of a holding a loop, and tying everything up. It gave me the shivers, it was so well done! *grins*
But honestly, the boys probably have their own hair care products. You can't expect them to be intimidating if they look like hell (unless you're going for ragged, which I do approve of).
Maybe Tim only uses it now and again to confuse his teammates. :P
Only without the dying (though Tim's always been the best type of martyr, if he had to be).
Mmm, time-travel romances. I bet Tim would lie in bed happily discussing the theories involved, and Kon's all "dude, I just press the button and it works."
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Pretty music = even more win. ^^
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And I love the play of inside/outside in the last one, as well as Tim's serene face, which I would imagine would haunt Kon's dreams later...
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Kon doesn't think he's ever smelled so nice after coming out of one of those tanks. When Tim towels himself off afterwards, too groggy to make comments, he just glows.
*Stacy goes off to coo in her happy place*
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I agree. The first was a cool idea, but I don't think it translated well to paper. I'd have to write the same thing a few dozen times before I find a version I like. The third one though...it just happened. I didn't think much of the thought, and the words just...whoa. Kon, come hang out with me. I need you for your uncertainties. ♥
Tim...Tim is very certain of himself. It makes for less art, I suppose.
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But honestly, the boys probably have their own hair care products. You can't expect them to be intimidating if they look like hell (unless you're going for ragged, which I do approve of).
Maybe Tim only uses it now and again to confuse his teammates. :P
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Ahahaa, you know they have super shampoo. Can't get caught smelling weird by the norms.
Aw, Kon. I like how he's expecting a role reversal, how it's Tim's job to save him and his job to be behind the glass.
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Now there's an AU that's worth playing with. *laughs* Blue Beetle and Little Beetle?
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Mmm, time-travel romances. I bet Tim would lie in bed happily discussing the theories involved, and Kon's all "dude, I just press the button and it works."
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