Home's Where the Heart is

[nudge]

Home's Where the Heart is
PG13; SHINee-Honew; Romance; nudge

note for jimi phasera ♥♥♥ vamp!shinee au oh god how do i live this down

Comments

[cruel_disorder]

Wow =) This was really wonderful! I loved the heart idea and how adorably incapable of being seductive Onew was. I also really enjoyed Minho's nonchalance with being a vampire and how effortless his flirting was, and then Onew's determination to make him teach him~ I really laughed during that part ^^ Your narrating voice was very engaging (LOL at Jinki getting fried) and the fic had excellent pacing. Thanks so much for sharing!

[ghostdrop]

YAAAAAAY THE WAIT IS FINALLY OVER :8DDDDDDD
yaayayayayayayay this is so cute and makes me wibble so hard and i already told you but who cares i'll say it again it is just THAT CUTE
my favourite part has to be the beach scene because omg thiiis:

"No, I'm not. Those are just rumours. I just sunburn really easily. But Minho," Jinki whines, "it hurts."
lol jinki u noob i am imagining this in my head
so cute ;____________;

also cameo appearance of kibum is kind of v v v v epic
also ghkhdf04cvd the ending. akshj melts ;;;;;;; o u

[jaybomb]

Have I ever told you you are my favorite SHINee writer? Because you are~

Everything about this was absolutely wonderful. You have the most excellent pacing and your phrasing is perfection.

A+ characterization. You made everything so easy to picture and I was thoroughly engaged with every sentence.

So many perfect little moments that I could quote, but my comment would get too long. Jinki's awkward nature and MinHo's understanding, JinKi's smile capturing MinHo's attention just ugh. Awesome.

And I love that you took a plotline that is sometimes over-complicated and made it simple without dumbing it down.

I smiled so often throughout this fic. And the part with Kibum had me giggling a bit; I can totally see him freaking out at the sight of fangs.

All in all, this was amazing. I think the best HoNew I've read. Definitely memming~ ^__^b

[jaybomb]

Ugh long review, someone hit me with a brick.

[onew]

brb reading (or not :P) ♥

[chinagirl4evr]

Wow, that was really amazing. I love the idea of Onew being goofy vampire and of course I love the the pairing of Tufuho. The fic was very well-written and
I enjoyed it very much :)