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cobra_fbr

[debating on name] Verse; Exceptional (Part 1): Chapter 1

Jan 27, 2012 23:58

Title : Exceptional (Part 1)
Characters/Pairings : eventual Peter Petrelli/Sylar/Gabriel Gray, Claire Bennet/Gretchen Berg
Rating : PG-13, for now
Words : ~2900
Spoilers : To the end, and the webcomics, if you turn your head and squint (but it could also be the Enterprise...).
Warnings : Some language. Uh, some barely-there girl/girl kissin', and ( Read more... )

claire/gretchen, heroes, sylar/peter, pg-13, fanfic

Comments 7

game_byrd January 28 2012, 16:06:49 UTC

Hey, this was great! I look forward to more. You are *so* descriptive! And such incredible attention to detail, so much sensory information. Really wonderful!

cobra_fbr January 28 2012, 18:26:21 UTC

Ohmigod, squee!!!!! X3 I was so nervous people would hate it and throw me off a bridge.

Thank you! I look forward to more, too. *shifty eyes* not... exactly sure where this is... going. Yet. I have a watercolor. XD

Thank you!!!

means2bhuman January 30 2012, 09:18:32 UTC

I agree! I'm not much into Gretchen/Claire, but I've been known to enjoy them when they're done well like you did here.

I'd love to see more.

cobra_fbr January 30 2012, 19:20:40 UTC

You know, me either, really. I really liked Claire and Zac (even though he may/may not be gay... o_O). But then, sometimes they're really cute together and I can't help it. ^^p

Thank you so much for reading! X3

lornrocks January 30 2012, 09:32:13 UTC

Side note, I love when people ship Claire and Gretchen, since it's sort of forget how it was pretty much canon.

And I can't wait to see more! I can't believe this is your first foray into Heroes fic, this is geat. :)

cobra_fbr January 30 2012, 19:25:22 UTC

I know, right? ^^p I'm happy with them together. It's kind of like the Oz/Willow or Tara/Willow thing (if you watch Buffy...). I liked Claire with Zac (gay???), but I like her with Gretchen too. It's not something I look for like Sylar/Peter, but it's a cute side plot!

I love how the writers weren't afraid to go so blatant with gay/lesbian themes, just a little... happy dance moment there. XP

Thank you!!! *offers cookie* I'm working through my own problems with writing the explicit lovin' scenes, because I. LOVE. READING. THEM. but I could not for the life of me work up the courage to write it until now. So. I'm excited/terrified for that! =DDDDDD

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cobra_fbr January 31 2012, 15:41:36 UTC

Thank you for reading (and liking)! ^-^

Oh, I know, right? I did too. But then I was like, wait. *doubletake* What? No, they're joking.... really? Dangit! Okay. Aw... look how cute Claire and Zach are together.... XP