Numb3rs Fic: Routine - A Drabble Series in Eight Parts.

May 29, 2009 13:01



Title: A Flash of Red. (Routine Series 1/8)
Pairing/Characters: Colby, OFC
Rating: PG
Summary: Colby is a military man. He knows the importance of a routine.
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Starts Mid Season 5 then veers into AU Territory
Notes/Warnings: Drabble Series in eight Parts. Darkness and Angst ahead. Inspired by comments I made in Read more... )

drabble series, fic, routine

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karahkwa May 29 2009, 13:09:47 UTC
Ouch! Poor Colby. You lifted him up just to crash him back down.

It was good, but so sad.

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emmademarais May 29 2009, 20:40:36 UTC
Wow. /blinks/

Man, you really did warn for that didn't you? It's intense, heartbreaking and yet in the end uplifting because Colby's the good man we always knew he was and he loves his daughter no matter what.

This is quite the series. Great job taking us through so much life in so few words. /applauds/

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paranoid_woman May 29 2009, 22:00:56 UTC
Oh, hon... you broke me! This was beautiful and real and I'm so glad you wrote this. This is the story of a lifetime full of love.

*hugs you very tight*

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mustangcandi May 30 2009, 03:47:09 UTC
I'll admit... I haven't been reading much fic (if at all) and I almost didn't read this when I saw the dark/angst bit. But, it's you... so I had to and I'm glad I did.

The only thing I can think of to describe it is beautiful sadness. Quite the trail of emotions you took us on and with so few words. VERY nice job.

PS Side note: I love that you're at least the fourth or fifth writer who has Colby with a red head. haha. Colby has good taste. :)

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jelsemium May 30 2009, 17:46:58 UTC
What a sad story, yet so beautifully told. Good work.

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