Fic: Far From Home

[cloversworld]

Verse: Bound by Destiny 5/?     [MASTER POST]
Chapter Title: FAR FROM HOME
Author: clover71
Fandom: Pokémon (Anime)
Pairing: Paul/ Ash (Comashipping)
Characters: Paul, Ash, Cilan, Iris, Trip, Brandon, Pikachu, Electivire
Rating: PG
Description: Written for love_bingo Round 2, for the square prompt, 'holding hands'
Word Count: 3,200+
Chapter Summary: Paul's

Comments

[vulpixi_misa]

There was more! And I didn't know! But I'm glad that I'm such a snooper or else I wouldn't have found the rest of this. I usually rely on Fanfiction.net but I guess you don't frequent there as often.

Anyway, I can hardly contain all the fangirl squealing I had to do for the past two chapters. I love the idea of Paul being in Unova and seeing his interaction with/against Trip was the one thing I wanted to see, so, wish granted, hooray! I also ultra love Iris picking on Ash, along with everyone else calling Paul his boyfriend.

I love the pacing of their relationship, and how even though they kissed and had their moments, it wasn't a full blown "thing" until chapter 3. (At least, that's how I feel.)

And I have to stop starting sentences with "I love" but honestly, I really do love everything about this fic. X3 Please update soon!

[clover71]

hee, you got me. i actually don't crosspost to comms and ffnet until the chapter has been read through by my friend, that's why i just posted chapter 2 at coma_shipping and will cross-post at pokefics and ffnet later.

i am actually still crossing my fingers paul will somehow show up in unova but that seems unlikely so if the producers won't bring him there, i thought i could :D and yes, an interaction with trip is one of my fantasies too. i so want paul to show trip who's the badass rival :)

glad you like the pacing of their relationship. need to warn you, and you may have noticed by now, that there will be tremendous time skip between some chapters.

thanks for the lovely comment. oh, and will i be seeing more of 'gaining from loss' soon? you left me on the edge of my seat :)

[vulpixi_misa]

I know right, since Dawn and Cynthia come back. *pout*

Time skips are fine, I'm just glad you could bring the two together without making it weird and "oh, they crossed oceans to see each other the very next day".

Oh, I'm actually trying to update that soon because of you. X3 This story is really inspirational and fulfills all the things I want in a Coma story.

[clover71]

yeah i did hear about dawn and cynthia coming back. i'm excited about it. what will make the producers bring paul back? if they bring barry back, i'm gonna start a campaign to bring paul to unova.

it is rumored ash is going to have a new rival? i hope you're not a fan of trip but in my opinion, he doesn't have much of a rival impact as gary and paul did. a new rival may add spice to the series.

i wish ash will challenge the sinnoh battle frontier at the end of this series, kinda like how he went back to kanto to challenge the battle frontier after his journey through hoenn. then maybe they can have paul alongside him. i can dream right?

can't wait for the next part of your story! ash and paul are so made for each other :)