Comments | cloudysky: Fic: RPF: When the Lights Begin to Fade (4/10).

cloudysky

Fic: RPF: When the Lights Begin to Fade (4/10).

Feb 17, 2011 20:48

Posting this now to get it out of the way. Got a busy weekend ahead of me (for once).

Title: When the Lights Begin to Fade (4/10).
Author: cloudysky.
Fandom: Chronicles of Narnia.
Pairing: Ben Barnes/William Moseley.
Rating: R.
Warnings: Real person slash.
Word count: 3,601.
Summary: What happens when the bright lights of fame begin to fade? What are you ( Read more... )

fic: rpf, fic: ben/will, fanfic, fic: narnia

Comments 4

lishalisha18 February 17 2011, 22:29:33 UTC

awww. they are so cute. if guy can have babies they will have the cutest babies ever. can't wait to read about what up with Ben mother.

theweddingfairy February 19 2011, 15:38:12 UTC

I don’t know when it started, but I can’t stop fucking thinking about you anymore and it’s driving me crazy

Love it!
So, so damn adorable...
And I must admit, I rather like the obsession with pink... hehe :)
I'm so glad they got together! :D

TWF x

GOOD STUFF asm613 February 24 2011, 10:04:41 UTC

‘Thank you...’whispered Will.

‘Thank you for what?’

‘For having the courage to say something today; we wouldn’t be here right now if you hadn’t.’
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I adore your will character- great dialogs. and ben's confession was so endearing. in response to will thanking ben for being courageous- i would have liked to have him say something to the affect that will makes him want to be more brave- to be a better man...you've spent some time with will telling ben to buck up and things will get better (in their coffee shop talk)- so i thought it wouldn't be out of place and it's more romantic than thanks. i've liked reading about their relationship/friendship getting reacquainted and building into something more.

nydoeclyastar February 24 2011, 17:26:38 UTC

Love it!! The cheesy romance part makes me smile because the two of them are just so adorable.

I laughed out loud when I read the part about Ben's father: "In fact, it all got a bit on the emotional side after that and Ben was glad when they finally left the room and his father bellowed, ‘Someone pass the whiskey!’ on his way to the bar." Too funny.

I CAN'T WAIT to read what is going on with Ben's mom. Update soon and keep up the fantastic work :)