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clawofcat

A Spectator Sport (1/1)

Sep 27, 2007 01:24

Title: A Spectator Sport
Timing: Post-NFA
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Spike/Buffy
Warnings: Graphic sexuality and course language
Summary: Set during my WIP “ All Wrong,” Buffy and Spike share a moment together after a grocery run. Talking dirty and self-pleasuring has never been so much fun.

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Comments 19

ldyavalon September 27 2007, 07:56:31 UTC

Darn, that was hot...I'll be coming back to read this again, many times ;)

clawofcat September 27 2007, 14:18:49 UTC

Then I guess your icon just about sums it up, eh? Thanks for reading, hun. I was on a dry spell there for the last month with school up and running again. Good thing Pass came along and threw this prompt my way to get my ass in gear.

kcarolj65 September 27 2007, 10:07:45 UTC

Oh. Oh wow.

I need a long walk, a cold shower, and about a carton of cigarettes now.

There's hot, and then there's hawt. And somewhere about ten miles beyond that, is this story.

I say again, Wow.

clawofcat September 27 2007, 14:21:17 UTC

I need a long walk, a cold shower, and about a carton of cigarettes now.
Are you sure you need all that? Sounds like a shag will set you straight.

Your review made me laugh. Thanks for that. Later today I'm going to be doing fieldwork down at Ground Zero, so I'll have to think happy thoughts.

xheartrockx September 27 2007, 19:37:41 UTC

*clears throat*
I tell you something. Whenever I want to read something really, really hot I come to your stories.

Once more... woah! So gonna need a shower now ;)

clawofcat September 28 2007, 15:03:11 UTC

Haha! Feelin' the heat on this one, hm? Mission accomplished, then. Hold still a sec. I'll get the fire hose!

xheartrockx September 28 2007, 15:20:55 UTC

that's not going to cut it anymore, i believe ;)
But at least it's warding of the chill in my room :D

only_passenger September 28 2007, 00:16:10 UTC

oh, fuck.

there is so much fabulousness in this story. it's what i wanted, and i love it.

hot, yes. really, really, really hot. i'm totally trembling and even less coherant than usual.

what i love most, though, is the rest. buffy dipping her finger in spike's come and then dotting it onto his nose. her leaning in the door frame, laughing, when she sets her eyes on exhibitionist!spike. the banter and teasing and quipping and sincere affection they pass back and forth the whole time. the playfulness and ease and attraction.

do you know the community fecundfic? you should post this there. it doesn't get a ton of posting action, but it's multi-fandom and a lot of people read it that don't read the communities we usually post in.

off to rec you. la la la!

clawofcat September 28 2007, 14:59:47 UTC

Eee! So pleased to hear that this is what you wanted. I was surprised how easily this one came. Writing about the mundane is something I really enjoy. This whole fic, in some ways, describes the Spuffy writing I do overall. Buffy's narration talks about the stolen moments of everyday living, and that's where a lot of my fics take place. During completely ordinary, uneventful instances ( ... )

eowyn_315 September 28 2007, 02:22:40 UTC

I like what you did with the ending. It works better this way, I think. Beautiful job (as usual). *squish*