WriterVerse Challenge #19: All Dialogue

Jul 12, 2015 01:52

All Talk | T | 100w | MCU | Natasha Romanoff/Sharon Carter | (Possibly works w/ Civil War canon but IDK) | also for femslash100 challenge #466: Dead.

“No, really. What was it like, when you were a kid? I mean, you never knew your parents, the first thing you did after nursing school was hitchhike to Colombia, and you came back a decorated SHIELD ( Read more... )

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swan_secrets July 12 2015, 09:47:56 UTC
My only criticism is that there isn't more!

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clarahow July 12 2015, 19:21:09 UTC
What a lovely criticism to have!!!! I'm glad you like it!!! <3

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xjadedgrlx July 13 2015, 00:55:55 UTC
I’m with swan_secrets, I would have liked to read more! I like the way you managed to capture Natasha’s flirtatious side; far too many writers fail to capture her sense of humor. I also like how you incorporate some of Sharon’s backstory into the plot; I feel like I needed that in order to connect with her a bit (since we didn’t learn a whole lot about her in CA:TWS).

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clarahow July 14 2015, 03:50:10 UTC
Hehe well, lucky for you both, this is actually part of a larger thing! And wow. this comment, I, wow. I worried about not being able to convey a similar feeling as I do with description in a dialogue-only piece but to hear this I just *blushes*

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salmon_pink July 27 2015, 14:47:16 UTC
ooooh, love this! Natasha simultaneously buttering Sharon up and trying to get in her head, Sharon seeing right through it, everything easing into that delicious flirting so effortlessly - it's perfect! ♥

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clarahow August 8 2015, 07:06:25 UTC
very glad you enjoy it :D (sorry I missed your comment until now, oops)

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