LJ Idol: Week Nine - Marching Orders

Jan 15, 2011 01:43

The orders come down and they say goodbye to their families. They stuff their lives into a duffel bag, their feet into their boots and they go. They march through sand, through jungles, through snow and ice. They do it because they had no other options, because they want to someday go to college, because they want to fight, because they want to ( Read more... )

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sweeny_todd January 15 2011, 07:04:27 UTC
Good lord.. there sure is an emotional punch there!

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basric January 15 2011, 09:58:10 UTC
A powerful entry. Very well done.

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myrna_bird January 15 2011, 20:01:44 UTC
Sorry for your losses. This was very clear cut. Well done.

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bewize January 15 2011, 20:25:46 UTC
Sweet and sad.

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snarkerdoodle January 16 2011, 00:40:11 UTC
This was a very well done piece, especially in so short a space.

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