LJ Idol: Week Three - It's A Trap!

Nov 20, 2010 12:42

“It’s a trap.”

I snarled and considered my options. Luke, the half-elven ranger, stood beside me as we surveyed the room. The trap wasn’t obvious, but we knew it was there. A sudden release of poison, or a stone that triggered the release of a dozen arrows that would shred through our bodies in seconds. Our thief had gone down three rooms ago, ( Read more... )

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basric November 20 2010, 22:25:24 UTC
Well written. Well done.

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dawnstar November 21 2010, 00:20:04 UTC
I can't believe no one else has written about D&D, in all the entries I've read thus far.

I love the story, too - the awkwardness, the excitement. I can feel each emotion as you carry me through it!

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myrna_bird November 21 2010, 00:23:21 UTC
Good story.Nice writing!

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majesticzaichik November 21 2010, 10:47:26 UTC
Great story! I really loved that second to last paragraph. It's like "Awkkwaaard..."

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awriterswindow November 21 2010, 16:58:16 UTC
And then we were kissing, kissing in that hot, wet way that only two hormonally-fueled, totally uncool, D&D-playing teenagers can kiss.

Been there. Love this line and this entry! :)

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