Liz- This was great and a nice read. It had good flow and you did a great job defining their character so that as a reader you can feel right along with them (and understand their need to be stupid stupid boys!)
You have no idea how much you mean to me, and how much it means that you gave me a chance on characters you don't know. I'm a little ridiculously flaily over the whole thing. I'm glad that if flowed right, up until maybe a week ago there was definitely different plot points until my friend who follows baseball pointed out that they made no sense so I was scrambling to pull it back together till the last minute.
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Great job!
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THANK YOU. ♥ You seriously made my week.
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