[FIC]: Soldiers of the Dust (Dean/Castiel, Adult)

Sep 03, 2010 18:44

Title: Soldiers of the Dust
Author: nyoka @ chocolate_muse
Characters/Pairing: Dean/Castiel
Rating: NC-17
Count: ~5,700
Disclaimer: Supernatural belongs to the CW and Kripke. I own nothing and no one.
Warnings/Spoilers: Takes place in the time period between 5.03 and 5.04.
Notes: Written for eretria as part of castielfest, working with several prompted ideas including, cuddling, ( Read more... )

challenge: castielfest, fandom: supernatural, genre: slash, type: one-shot, pairing: dean/castiel

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squeemonster September 4 2010, 19:11:46 UTC
This is a stunning piece of work. Your writing is always so lyrical, I feel as if I'm reading poetry when I read your stories. Everything just flows together so seamlessly.

This was hot and heartbreaking and hopeful, all at the same time. Thank you for sharing it. <333

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nyoka September 6 2010, 15:04:41 UTC
Oh, bb, thank you! Your words have put a big smile on my face. I'm so glad the writing style worked for you, as well as the emotions this piece evoked. These two just own me.

Again thank you so much for reading and for your lovely words! It's all so appreciated. ♥

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gabby_silang September 4 2010, 20:07:01 UTC
This is really, really gorgeous. Might just be my favorite thing you've written. It's restrained, and sweet, and yearning, and it put such a smile on my face.

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nyoka September 6 2010, 15:10:10 UTC
Oh, bb, thank you for reading and for your awesome f/b! You've put a smile on my face. I'm so incredibly thrilled you liked this piece. Guh, if they don't give me some D&C in S6 I will cry. These two still make me so happy with their lovely issues.

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orbiting_saturn September 5 2010, 00:42:18 UTC
I just knew a first time fic by you would be unbelievably beautiful. This was exactly what I wanted. Perfect. The slow build, the lingering touches, the language. And it was lovely that it was Cas who crossed the boundaries, who slowly unraveled Dean. I think this might be my favorite story of yours so far, which is really saying a LOT because I have loved all of the fics that I've read by you.

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nyoka September 6 2010, 15:21:54 UTC
Hi there! Thank you so much for reading this and for letting me know your thoughts! It's so very much appreciated. I was nervous about doing a first-time fic, so I'm incredibly thrilled this piece worked for you on that level! Especially the slow build and the touches, the slow unraveling. I loved the prompts I was given and I had a fab time trying to find ways to have Cas and Dean take down each other boundaries. I'm so honored this is a favorite of yours -- I'm seriously smiling so big right now! Again, thank you so much for your words of support!

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auburnnothenna September 5 2010, 02:53:14 UTC
That is a truly lyrical, elegant final line.

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nyoka September 6 2010, 15:23:21 UTC
Wow, thank you! I'm so glad that line worked for you! Again thanks for reading and for commenting! <3

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nyoka September 6 2010, 15:28:39 UTC
Thank you so much bb!I'm really honored by your words ♥

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