Trying to make my bio for job.

[chibisub]

How is this so far

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[jizai]

Do you want advice from an English teacher? >P

Make sure your verbs all stay in the same tense and are singular or plural as needed. Aside from that, and a stray comma here and there, seems good to me.

[chibisub]

I use to be better with all of that stuff... until I moved up here, I got bad again *sighs*. Justin will be over here later today to help me fix it x_x

[chibisub]

Here's my bio, how is it now? http://www.handmadenews.org/columnist/index.php?aid=269

[jizai]

Sounds great!