Comments | chasingpolaris: {16--sakurai sho/horikita maki} under the moonlight (3/? ongoing)

novemberbaby in chasingpolaris

{16--sakurai sho/horikita maki} under the moonlight (3/? ongoing)

Dec 27, 2011 21:54

Title: Under the Moonlight (3/?)
Pairing: Sakurai Sho/Horikita Maki
Rating: PG
Summary: Sakurai Sho is an aspiring novelist who moves into a vacant room above the Kiyoraka Teahouse owned by the Hara family. There he meets the proprietress’s daughter Hara Marina, a shy seventeen-year-old girl with a penchant for reading. They grow close by reading ( Read more... )

genre: alternate universe, genre: fluff/romance, genre: het, pair: sakurai sho/horikita maki

Comments 5

frostbittenlove December 28 2011, 02:56:07 UTC

First as always. HA. \O/

Now lemme go read trololol :3

novemberbaby December 28 2011, 02:58:18 UTC

OMG I JUST POSTED WAE YOU HERE SO QUICK? :O

You've already read most of it yesterday via gchat. /runnssssss

frostbittenlove December 28 2011, 03:02:34 UTC

WOMAN I HAVE FINISHED READING THIS PART FWEEEEEE~~~

Now lemme go read the other two because omg I need to relive everything heee because even if I have a sore throat rn I'm not getting tired of the sweet fuwafuwa fluff heeeee /swoons

novemberbaby December 28 2011, 03:08:22 UTC

YOU ARE TOO FAST FOR ME WOMAN :O I'm gonna have to stop writing this fic lolol /dies

WHAAAAAAAT. THOSE ARE UNBETA'ED TOO AND WAITING FOR YOU TO BETA. No pressure though. You know I've got backups. /shot

AND YOU SHOULD BE RESTING BECAUSE YOUR BODY HURTS OMG ;O;

frostbittenlove December 28 2011, 14:37:50 UTC

BACK WITH A PROPER COMMENT. UHM.

Actually, idek where to start -- I'm just really happy to see an update as opposed to my Keio Boy, Tokyo Girl fail series ugh and ngl you've driven me to try writing a series now orz. /dies

I really, really like how they're actually paying close attention to each other, hearts on their sleeves, and yet they're at a pace that rivals a snail's orz. Only because Marina is, first and foremost, a girl who thinks she is not one to be forward with her feelings, and because Sho is an inherent Cap'n Failboat who always ends up either flustering her or embarrassing her or worse, just failing. lol. But it's so fumbly and awkward in that cute way because that's how they are.

And. AND. MARINA SWITCHING ROOMS WITH HER SISTER OMFG SAKURAI-SAN IF YOU DON'T EVEN GET THIS HINT THEN IDEK =____= He should just ask for her hand in marriage from Hara-mama, really. Hara-mama practically ships them. THAT KNOWING LOOK. orz Sho take a hint djfsdlfkjf /flips table lol ( ... )