VM Fic: Livening Up the Evening (Logan, Veronica, Duncan, Mac, Wallace, Dick, and Lilly Kane) PG

[celtic_flicka]

Title: Livening Up the Evening
Pairing/Character: Logan, Veronica, Duncan, Mac, Wallace, Dick, and Miss Lilly Kane
Word Count: ~2,800
Rating: PG. Fluff-o-rama.
Summary: Lilly Kane is bored...
Spoilers: Through mid-season 2, but this takes place four and a half years after the S3 finale.
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Comments

[doniczka]

AWWWWWW!That was beyond awesome *giggles* I love your little Lilly:)And man,but kids are often way smarter than adults,their logic is so simple and always bings the best results! Great job! *adds to memories*

[celtic_flicka]

Thank you! I have a talkative, nosy almost-6-year-old, so she was my model for Lilly 2.

[spygrrl76]

OMG this rocked!! Lilly 2 (Yeah Dick! lol) had me cracking up. She is so sweet and cute. I love that it was from her point of view and how she demonstrated that sometimes kid logic is the best logic. I'm totally adding this to my memories. :)

[celtic_flicka]

Thank you!

Sometimes kid logic does not resemble our earth logic, but sometimes it's so simple, it makes sense! You love him, he loves you, quit lying and interrupting and get on with the kissing and making up! What's so hard about that? :)

[havemy_heart]

This is totally made of win! Yay for little Lilly getting Logan and Veronica back together :D

[celtic_flicka]

Thanks! When Aunt Lilly caused Veronica and Logan so much trouble, I liked the idea of Little Lilly helping to fix things!

Since this is my first fic that's straight-up fluff with virtually no angst, and you seem to be our resident connossieur of those stories, I was really hoping you would like it!

[jjazz59]

This is perfect. It took a 6 year old to get Logan and Veronica to really tallk things out. Now Lilly is going to try the same thing with Mac and Wallace. Too cute. Wonderful writing.

[celtic_flicka]

Wouldn't Mac and Wallace make a cute couple? *starts thinking of plots for a M/W fic...*

[love_is_epic]

This was FANTASTIC!! I love your little Lilly voice!! I loved that you used a little girl (especially as one as precocious as I'm sure little Lilly would be) to show us what was going on.

And this part :

Veronica gives Logan a funny look, with her eyes all big. “Shoot me down,” Logan says. He’s still playing with his sleeves. If I did that, Daddy would tell me to stop fidgeting.

... had me cracking up! Very funny!

Thanks so much for writing this : ) It was a very, very enjoyable read and made my day!

[celtic_flicka]

Thanks! I've noticed that when my 5-year-old gets bored, she starts noticing little things (like Logan's constant sleeve-pulling) that adults don't. And she ends up repeating things that no one knew she heard...