Comments | celtic_flicka: VM Fic: The Defendant, Pt. 2/2 (Logan, Lynn, Veronica, and others) R

celtic_flicka

VM Fic: The Defendant, Pt. 2/2 (Logan, Lynn, Veronica, and others) R

Oct 15, 2009 14:00

Part 1 can be found here!

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( Click here for part 2 of The Defendant... )

veronica, logan, vm fic, lilly, duncan, fic, keith, aaron, lynn, veronica mars

Comments 20

medjunkie October 16 2009, 15:08:51 UTC

This is a great AU story, I like Veronica standing by him, and the gradual build up of their relationship. It was also good to see Aaron hoisted by his own petard.

celtic_flicka October 16 2009, 18:34:45 UTC

Thank you! I thought a lot about what Veronica would have done if he'd been the one who was ostracized, and I decided that she would defend him even if she was mad at him herself!

anonymous October 16 2009, 19:24:38 UTC

Just read both stories and thoroughly enjoyed reading them. Your characterization of Logan and Veronica were spot on. This was an interesting take on how Logan's abuse could have come to light. I really loved it. Thanks for sharing.

celtic_flicka October 17 2009, 01:12:58 UTC

Thank you! He had such a savior complex on the show, I thought it would be interesting if he'd actually been able to save his mother, in a manner of speaking--and Lilly too, for that matter.

Thanks for reading!

sweetumms33 October 16 2009, 21:59:18 UTC

I loved these! I just read both stories and enjoyed them. I liked how you played with plot elements to make a really great AU. Nice job!

celtic_flicka October 17 2009, 01:13:34 UTC

Thanks! I love messing around with AUs and "what ifs". Thanks for reading and commenting!

rowanceleste October 17 2009, 16:14:11 UTC

Yay!I loved it! I need you write me more stories though please! K? Thx!

celtic_flicka October 17 2009, 17:24:39 UTC

:) Workin' on it! I'm getting a lot of good ideas from the prompts at annie_oakley and shangri__la's new fic challenge comm.

havemy_heart October 17 2009, 17:01:10 UTC

This is completely awesome, and a perfect follow-up to the previous fic. I love that even though Logan admitted to Veronica that he staged the fight in the poolhouse, that she forgave him and stood by him. And of course I love that Logan finally dumped Lilly for good and he and Veronica ended up together :D

*mems

celtic_flicka October 17 2009, 17:23:44 UTC

While I was writing it, I realized that Logan's relationship patterns with Lilly and Aaron were pretty similar (understandably). So I decided that when he chose to break the pattern with Aaron, upon realizing that his father was never going to change, that he'd end up doing the same with Lilly.