Distant Murmurs

[celandinehobbit]

The sounds of the yelling beat insistently in his mind causing him to groan aloud at the pain it caused him as he once again regained consciousness. Lying curled up in the fetal-position on the floor, Daniel hazarded to open his eyes once more. Last time he had tried, the piercing pain in his head at the effort had caused him to immediately cease

Comments

[gater88]

It's great Cel. I really like it. I know you already know that I like it but I wanted to reread because it is different when you read as a beta lol. Plus it is worth reading more than once :P

[celandinehobbit]

Aww thanks! I know what you mean too. Going over a fic word by word without actually 'reading' it is very different. I do appreciate your beta too. It was great.:)