this is SO cute!! chase is sensitive without being over-the-top and ridiculous, and the imagery is fantastic. simple, gets the point across, and oh-so-sweet....and i dont even usually read chase/cameron!
Nice job. The Chase/Cameron is growing on me. Especially since the writers have turned House into an unfeeling bastard with no redeeming qualities. (Yeah, I'm bitter. ;)
Also, Chase has grown on me. I think he's the only character that's had positive character development this season. It's nice to think of them both happy.
I didn't expect Cameron to come back. Yay for happy endings.
Eh, now I feel guilty that I haven't gone and read yours yet. ...House was always an unfeeling bastard with no redeeming qualities. ... *hides* Nah, that's not true. I used to be a House/Cam shipper. And then I think it was after The Honeymoon when I just stopped. Cameron's "I was wrong. You just couldn't love me" comment really got to me. Yay indeed for happy endings. That was always going to happen, although I wasn't sure if it was too...I don't know, cliche isn't the right word. Never mind. Thanks for that, I'll go pop over to yours. (I'm always jealous that you seem to get 10 times the amount of reviews. Popular demand, your ship.)
Wonderful. I never expected to like Chameron on the show, but I've become somewhat smitten with them. At least the way they were in Human Error. This fic made me hold my breath and smile at the same time. I kept hoping Cam would be back with coffee, yet told myself she wouldn't. So I was as happy as Chase when she returned. Well done.
Oh my gosh, rarely, if ever, do I comment on things, and certainly not immediately after reading them, but damn. Damn damn damn. This caught me in the right moment and I just oh. I was so, so sad for Chase, it hurt to read it and it was so beautiful and mellow, not over the top and not hammering in the angst but just sort of soft and falling.
Opening her heart for so many others and at the same time, shutting it tight for him.
Yes! Exactly! That's what she does and you've said it perfectly!
What he had been looking forward to was the morning after, lying in bed and talking about nothing, sharing a piece of toast because it was the only slice left.
Nnngh! This is the sweetest image ever. I want that for them too.
I'm-a add this to my memories, thank you for writing it. ♥
Wow, that's probably one of the best reviews I've ever recieved! Very complimentary, thank you ;) I was so so scared I'd gone overly angsty, but you're reassuring me pretty good... Thanks heaps!
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this is SO cute!! chase is sensitive without being over-the-top and ridiculous, and the imagery is fantastic. simple, gets the point across, and oh-so-sweet....and i dont even usually read chase/cameron!
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I'm so glad you don't think it's too over the top...there was a point where it definitely was, and I deleted a whole chunk of it. But anyway. Thanks!
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Also, Chase has grown on me. I think he's the only character that's had positive character development this season. It's nice to think of them both happy.
I didn't expect Cameron to come back. Yay for happy endings.
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...House was always an unfeeling bastard with no redeeming qualities. ... *hides*
Nah, that's not true. I used to be a House/Cam shipper. And then I think it was after The Honeymoon when I just stopped. Cameron's "I was wrong. You just couldn't love me" comment really got to me.
Yay indeed for happy endings. That was always going to happen, although I wasn't sure if it was too...I don't know, cliche isn't the right word. Never mind. Thanks for that, I'll go pop over to yours. (I'm always jealous that you seem to get 10 times the amount of reviews. Popular demand, your ship.)
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It's not a requirement. lol
House was always an unfeeling bastard with no redeeming qualities. ... *hides*
Nah, that's not true.
No, it's really not. He had his moments where it was clear the guy had a heart. Doesn't seem that way anymore.
(I'm always jealous that you seem to get 10 times the amount of reviews. Popular demand, your ship.)
Heh, don't be. I post a link to my stories at the House/Cameron community, which brings a lot of readers over here.
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And Chase was just touchy-feely enough. I liked it. Good job.
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Touch-feely? Wasn't what I was going for, but...thanks! ;)
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Great job. :)
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Thank you!
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Oh my gosh, rarely, if ever, do I comment on things, and certainly not immediately after reading them, but damn. Damn damn damn. This caught me in the right moment and I just oh. I was so, so sad for Chase, it hurt to read it and it was so beautiful and mellow, not over the top and not hammering in the angst but just sort of soft and falling.
Opening her heart for so many others and at the same time, shutting it tight for him.
Yes! Exactly! That's what she does and you've said it perfectly!
What he had been looking forward to was the morning after, lying in bed and talking about nothing, sharing a piece of toast because it was the only slice left.
Nnngh! This is the sweetest image ever. I want that for them too.
I'm-a add this to my memories, thank you for writing it. ♥
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I was so so scared I'd gone overly angsty, but you're reassuring me pretty good...
Thanks heaps!
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