Comments | candisquill: Only Just a Dream (Colby, PG-13)

candisquill

Only Just a Dream (Colby, PG-13)

Nov 09, 2014 19:48

Posted for the numb3rs100 prompt: Wage...

Title: Only Just a Dream
Pairing/Characters: Colby (pre-series)
Rating: PG-13 (imagery!)
Word Count: 200
Summary: He may not have pulled the trigger, but his fingerprints were on the loaded gun.
Spoilers: None. Pre-series.
Notes/Warnings: Once again, the Colby muse came out of hiding when this prompt was posted to numb3rs100 ( Read more... )

fic: drabble, genre: general, fandom: numb3rs, rating: pg-13, character: colby granger

Comments 11

julietm November 10 2014, 01:03:03 UTC

SOOOOO GOOOOD! I want to huggle him forever...except that he's all sweaty and yummy and I probably shouldn't hug him when he's vulnerable. *wink

mustangcandi November 15 2014, 20:05:36 UTC

hahaha. Yeah, leave hugging him when he's vulnerable to me. I got this.

;)

*hugs. Thanks for reading and betaing and cheering.

emmademarais November 10 2014, 01:24:02 UTC

Ooh! What a great visual of Colby's chest character study! I really enjoyed watching his dog tags as he breathed rapidly the idea that this mix of memory and dream would continue to haunt him.

Well done as always and always a treat to have your fic on the comm. Thanks, hon! /hugs/

mustangcandi November 15 2014, 20:08:49 UTC

I've been trying to get the drabble muse to come out and play. I have so many of the prompts to write! The Colby!muse really wanted this one so I gave it to him.

Thank YOU for reading! Hopefully I'll have a couple more to post soon. :)

melissima November 10 2014, 03:05:17 UTC

Oooh. I love character studies so much! And you really nailed the details here. The dog tags, the scent of burning in the air. lovely. Thank you!

mustangcandi November 15 2014, 20:10:24 UTC

Thank you!!!!!! I'm glad you liked. I want to post more to the comm... and I'm using NaNoWriMo to write 100 words of something a day. Hopefully more drabbles will come before the end of the month. :)

canadiana1 November 10 2014, 23:49:02 UTC

I really-really-really like it!! More Colby please!

mustangcandi November 15 2014, 20:10:56 UTC

haha. I'm so glad you enjoyed! I will definitely try to write more Colby.

ladygray99 November 14 2014, 08:21:35 UTC

Trying to catch up on everything. So perfectly Colby.

mustangcandi November 15 2014, 20:11:42 UTC

Thank you!! :)

I won't lie... the image of a shirtless Colby with dog tags really was the reason for this. But then the muse went all flashbacky on me and I had to roll with it.

ladygray99 November 15 2014, 20:53:04 UTC

Those bastard muses.