Frozen

May 21, 2012 22:03


Author: neyah444
Title: Frozen
Rating: G
Character/s: Balinor, Hunith
Pairing/s: Balilnor, Hunith
Summary: Her eyes were shining though she had promised herself she’d be strong.
Word count: 100
Author’s notes: this takes place in the pre-canon era. Betaed by jelazakazone. Thank you, bb for taking a look at it this late!

Frozen )

rating:g, p:balinor/hunith, type:drabble, pt 007:family, *c:neyah444

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archaeologist_d May 21 2012, 21:20:50 UTC
Poor Hunith. At least she lived, even though it was without him. Good job with this.

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neyah444 May 21 2012, 21:29:42 UTC
Thank you! I feel sorry for them both. But at least Hunith had Merlin. :)

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hogwartsvixxxen May 21 2012, 21:28:05 UTC
Beautiful and heartbreaking. Well done

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neyah444 May 21 2012, 21:30:04 UTC
Thanks! ♥

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hogwartsvixxxen May 21 2012, 21:37:19 UTC
♥ :) *hugs*

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jelazakazone May 21 2012, 22:16:45 UTC
You already know I love this. I love the intensity here between them and how silent and suffering they both are about it. What they don't say speaks volumes to me.

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neyah444 May 21 2012, 22:28:07 UTC
Thank you so much! Your idea about the ending made it so much better:) It's practically a collaboration! :) ♥

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jelazakazone May 21 2012, 22:34:32 UTC
Yay! I'm glad you liked it better this way:D

I think if you work with a beta who fits, it is a type of collaboration.

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neyah444 May 22 2012, 15:40:07 UTC
It seems you fit perfectly!:)

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neyah444 May 22 2012, 15:39:34 UTC
Thank you very much! ♥

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yenny2206 May 22 2012, 16:21:21 UTC
Ohh this was sad and yet lovely.

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neyah444 May 22 2012, 17:01:08 UTC
Thanks! I'm happy you liked it.

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