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clea2011 in camelot_drabble

His

Sep 03, 2013 21:03

Arthur watched as his new servant shuffled about his duties.

He could cheerfully strangle his father for this one. The boy... what was his name? Merlin... well that was a stupid name but probably suited the scrawny little beta who wouldn't ever be any good for anything other than a serving job anyway and didn't even seem to be much good at that. ( Read more... )

rating:nc-17, pt 073:attraction, c:merlin, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, *c:clea2011, c:arthur

Comments 14

judin September 3 2013, 21:10:09 UTC

*whining* How could you end it there? It was so hot! And I really liked Arthur being an arrogant brat, and Merlin fighting his instincts (but succumbing in the end of course <3).

Please write more? Pleeeeaaase?

clea2011 September 3 2013, 21:16:23 UTC

I had to - I'd run out of time to get it posted and gone horribly over the wordcount and it always takes me ages to write porn so... I sort of had to stop there. But I will add to it when there's a suitable prompt. Thanks for your encouraging comment :D

judin September 3 2013, 21:20:53 UTC

Seeing as I just posted my entry and it is 4775 words long, I can't quite excuse you for stopping on account of length, but running out of time, on the other hand, is something I can relate to. And you'd better continue, cause I wanna read more! :D

clea2011 September 4 2013, 23:35:02 UTC

I saw, I read it, it's fab :)

witty_teacup September 3 2013, 21:31:58 UTC

Oh gosh, this was brilliant! I don't read them often, but I do love reading omegaverse fics. You did awesome on this, and I think it fits really well with the prompt.

The writing on this was fantastic, and I like how much of a spoiled, arrogant bastard Arthur was coming off as until he realized Merlin was an omega. The little bit of possessive nature taking over near the end was really great, too.

All in all, I really liked this! Great job, and I do look forward to more should prompts allow it :)

clea2011 September 4 2013, 23:36:33 UTC

Thanks :) Hopefully there will be some more, I've not tried omegaverse in Merlin before and it took longer than I expected.

brunettepet September 3 2013, 22:21:48 UTC

Arthur's internal bitching about Merlin was amusing and then this turned on a dime when he caught Merlin's scent. I'd love to read more in this 'verse. I can't imagine Uther is going to be very happy that he gave Merlin this job as a reward.

clea2011 September 4 2013, 23:40:44 UTC

Thanks :) I think there will be some more, I don't think I can resist Uther's reaction.

bumerbmw September 5 2013, 21:40:17 UTC

aww the ending came too fast! loved it!

clea2011 September 6 2013, 13:49:56 UTC

Thanks :)

archaeologist_d September 6 2013, 23:46:33 UTC

Very hot. Loved how Merlin was fighting it and Arthur wouldn't let him go. :D

clea2011 September 7 2013, 21:42:45 UTC

Thanks, glad you liked it :)