Comments | camelot_drabble: The Innocence In Your Eyes

witty_teacup in camelot_drabble

The Innocence In Your Eyes

Aug 12, 2013 16:10

Author: witty_teacup
Title: The Innocence In Your Eyes
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Arthur/Merlin
Character/s: Arthur, Merlin
Summary: On a trip to the lower town, Arthur finds himself unintentionally drawn to the pickpocket that steals from him.
Warnings: None
Word Count: 999
Prompt: #70 - Amused
Author's Notes: I can't even express in words how displeased I am ( Read more... )

pt 070:amused, c:merlin, type:drabble, p:arthur/merlin, *c:witty_teacup, rating:pg-13, c:arthur

Comments 19

rottencreampuff August 12 2013, 20:19:58 UTC

I LOVE IT YOU DID A FANTASTIC JOB ;LKDFS I PRETTY MUCH SUFFOCATED MY CAT DURING THE KISSING SCENE OMG

witty_teacup August 13 2013, 22:04:06 UTC

NONONONO DON'T SUFFOCATE YOUR CAT PLEASE

THANK YOU THOUGH I'M REALLY GLAD YOU LIKED IT <3

47eleven August 13 2013, 02:15:13 UTC

NICE!!!!!!

witty_teacup August 13 2013, 22:04:19 UTC

Thank you!

osky291 August 13 2013, 02:28:35 UTC

That... I'm a little speechless right now. Because ARTHURRR!!! Ahhhh...That was awesome! Oh wow!

witty_teacup August 13 2013, 22:05:11 UTC

Aha, thank you very much! I'm crap at writing kissing scenes but I suppose practice makes perfect?

osky291 August 14 2013, 00:46:38 UTC

Haha! Yes it does. I highly recommend it ;)

destiny_chicken August 13 2013, 14:14:20 UTC

The kissing scene was great, particularly this:
He can feel the boy's pulse hammering under his hand, and where at first, the boy kept trying to pull away, body tense and rigid, he slowly melted into it. The boy angles his head, pressing deeper into the kiss.

Excellent work!

witty_teacup August 13 2013, 22:05:49 UTC

You really think so? Wow, thank you very much! <3

candymacaron August 14 2013, 08:55:31 UTC

Displeased, why? I thought it was nicely done! :)

witty_teacup August 14 2013, 18:23:01 UTC

I'm just really fussy over my work. But thank you very much! I'm really glad you think so :)