Bully

Aug 12, 2013 08:54

Author: Loopstagirl
Title: Bully
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: None.
Character/s: Merlin, Arthur, various
Summary: All he had to do was force a smile on his face and pretend he found it funny.
Warnings: Bullying.
Word Count: 999
Prompt: Amused
Author's Notes: This is a really depressing use of the prompt, sorry. My brain fried.

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pt 070:amused, c:merlin, type:drabble, rating:pg-13, *c:loopstagirl, c:arthur

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archaeologist_d August 12 2013, 12:06:45 UTC
I liked that Merlin thought he was trapped into doing those things. Good thing Arthur was there.

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loopstagirl August 12 2013, 12:45:21 UTC
Thank you!! I wanted something a bit different to the average bullying story, hence also having it as Merlin being the bully rather than the usual way of Arthur.

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47eleven August 12 2013, 12:16:53 UTC
I like this very much

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loopstagirl August 12 2013, 12:43:17 UTC
Thank you, really glad you like it!

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wanderlust48 August 12 2013, 14:16:44 UTC
Yes it was a little sad, but I liked it. And I almost didn't catch your twist at the end- that it's from the POV of Merlin, not Arthur!

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loopstagirl August 15 2013, 21:27:11 UTC
Thanks!! I'm glad it was subtle enough that it wasn't obvious from the beginning! Thank you so much.

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rottencreampuff August 12 2013, 15:05:38 UTC
I really liked this drabble, and how Arthur wasn't the bully as usual.

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loopstagirl August 15 2013, 21:28:26 UTC
Thank you, that really means a lot!

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destiny_chicken August 13 2013, 13:20:23 UTC
You had me fooled! I had to re-read it in the new context, and it really works! Great job!

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loopstagirl August 15 2013, 21:28:56 UTC
Thank you!! I'm glad it wasn't obvious but that you still thought it worked! Thank you so much!

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