Is it too early to ask you to marry me? 'cause, jesus fucking christ, I love you for this. Not only was it beautifully well-written, and hot, but it was realistic. And that's the kind of thing that's usually lacking in incest fics. But you made it work, and that makes you the most awesome thing since god.
Haha, wow, thank you! I'm actually really glad to see the word realistic in reference to one of my fics, as that's something that really bugs me about others stories and I really try to bring forward in my own. So yay, I'm pleased you think I did a decent job at it. ;)
Kevin doesn't know how this will change things between them, or if it even will at all. He's never been a think-first type of person, Describes him perfectly. Loved it.
I really like this. The last line is beautiful and so true. I really love how you capture the atmosphere, the feel here, it's very catching and beautiful!
Amazing. Truly Amazing!make_me_over_nlMarch 14 2007, 01:56:10 UTC
I melted. No joke. Lol. Yeah. That has to be THE hottest story I've ever read. It wasn't full of sexuality, well, it was, but not porn. It was definitely just AMAZING! without being too over the top.
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And now I'll shut up. :]
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I melted. No joke. Lol. Yeah. That has to be THE hottest story I've ever read. It wasn't full of sexuality, well, it was, but not porn. It was definitely just AMAZING! without being too over the top.
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