Title: Birthday Surprise
Author:
calleigh4ever Rating: T
Pairing: Stanathan
Disclaimer: This is a real person fic but I assure you that all the things happening in the story have never happened and are completely fictional. No harm intended! This story is entirely nonprofit and just for fun.
Dedication: So this goes out to Stana for her birthday. Although I really
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quite a few typos and some grammar errors though. Kind of detracts from the story ...
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I just read the second part and it too has some problems, particularly your use of the word "previously". It isn't "previewsly".
If you are ever in need of someone to read through your writing and help you with grammar/spelling/etc I'd be happy to. English is my first language so it's a bit easier for me. :)
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Please, write more whennever you feel it. ;)
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I thought the entire setup was very cute and I especially liked how you brought that bracelet she has been wearing for quite a while into the picture. (Still wondering where she got that from and why does she wear it all the time)
If you feel like writing more, please do so. It would always be welcome from me.
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I've been wondering about the bracelet for some time as well and I thought thsi was a good way to explain it to myself lol
Although I'm hoping it's a prop from the show and that Kate got it from Alexis as a sign of them bonding
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