Prompt Post Part II

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Performance anxiety!Martin cleo_2010 September 28 2011, 17:59:52 UTC
I'd love to read Martin getting so nervous a wound up about sex that when it comes to it, he can't perform. Of course, then I'd love to read him getting to know and relax with his partner and having some half decent happy, loving, sex. Your choice but a man please and I'm partial to CP characters over original creations (unless you're going to write something long then have at it, I like to get to know my characters ;) ) I want to see someone really caring for Martin.

I don't really prompt often but it's fun being in charge! Write for me filling fairies of loveliness! I can't get horny but helpless Martin out of my head at the moment, please help him!

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Re: Performance anxiety!Martin cleo_2010 September 28 2011, 18:40:12 UTC
Ooooo seconded!

I can't get horny but helpless Martin out of my head at the moment, please help him!

I'll have him ;)

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Re: Performance anxiety!Martin cleo_2010 September 28 2011, 19:25:05 UTC
I'm on it like white on rice...

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Re: Performance anxiety!Martin cleo_2010 September 28 2011, 20:00:17 UTC
"Hang in there horny!Martin, help is on the way!"

Eeee, I'm very excited, my first prompt fill!

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fill 1/2 tiwtin September 28 2011, 23:46:02 UTC
"Martin... Martin, I'm coming in, okay ( ... )

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fill 2a/2 tiwtin September 28 2011, 23:48:39 UTC
"Lie down on the bed, and let me just touch you," Douglas said holding up the bottle of scented oil ( ... )

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fill 2b/2 tiwtin September 28 2011, 23:49:42 UTC
Martin sucked in his breath as the pressure against Douglas' body built. He gripped Douglas' slippery shoulders at the moment Douglas' body yielded and the head of his cock penetrated his body, a shocked gasp at the tightness escaping his lips ( ... )

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Re: fill 2b/2 cleo_2010 September 29 2011, 00:13:59 UTC
This is so lovely. Such a sweet fill!

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Re: fill 2b/2 cleo_2010 September 29 2011, 01:24:45 UTC
Oh wow...wow...

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OP in a sweet yet decidedly sweaty puddle cleo_2010 September 29 2011, 06:25:47 UTC
Signs of a brilliant fill:

a) heart racing
b) can't spell
c) keeps rereading and not replying
d) eyes glazed over
e) thinks you're wonderful

Wow, this is just perfect, so flipping sweet and hot and guh. I loved that you had Douglas doubting that Martin doesn't fancy him, it really shows how much Martin has gotten under his skin which you then show with 'I love yous'. First time I love you fics are also my thing big time, makes my heart flutter with loveliness.

"Lie down on the bed, and let me just touch you,"That sentence in Douglas's voice, oh my goodness. Just... oh my goodness. The way you built up, I keep rereading, is just gorgeously beautiful. I love the way you used massage, in particular the position of Douglas across Martin's front, not back, that was especially lovely. And Martin tops! Huzzah! *melts* I adore the last line too, while it's third time lucky for most, it's fifth time for Martin ( ... )

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Re: OP in a sweet yet decidedly sweaty puddle tiwtin September 29 2011, 06:33:11 UTC
Yey, OP comment.mGlad you liked it. :-)

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Re: fill 2b/2 theotherdenise September 29 2011, 13:27:20 UTC
Aww, so sweet! And Douglas topping from the bottom is my new favourite thing :D

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