Where our heroine pimps a poem. Cos she can.

[cabaiste84]

So, I'm still up, and it's cold, and I'm listening to anord on the radio, copying photos of my knitting on to Photobucket, and trying to come up with songs from movie soundtracks to play on the show the week after next. I really should be writing, but otherwise, the sun's a ball of butter

Comments

[morbane]

Oh, I love it!

Have you been editing it and re-editing it? It feels very polished. I like everything except the last two lines, which don't quite do it justice, even though I realise you need something there, like string on a balloon.

[cabaiste84]

Thank you. :) I'd say this is it's second draft-ish. I gave Matt the version I posted, which he absolutely loved.

Yeah, I wasn't really sure how to end it! I'll figure something out. ;P

[cynima]

Your poem is really sexy.

[cabaiste84]

Heh, thanks. ;) It was a weird experience writing it, seeing as a lot of my other poems featuring sex and romance were *extremely* dark and sardonic. So, actually writing a positive sex poem was something new altogether! ;P

[anord]

That's so beautiful, and you're so brave for sharing it!

[cabaiste84]

Thanks, darling. :)

[abitunlikely]

I've always loved your poetry. You have such a great way with your words and imagery. I wish I could write poetry more like this!