Fic: Vizzini's Rule (58/105)

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Title: Vizzini's Rule, Chapter 58

Rating: PG-13

Warnings: Nope, unless you find male chauvinism really offensive...

Spoilers: Season One thru Out of Time (1x10)

Disclaimer: Torchwood and all its wonderfulness belong to Russell T. Davies and the Mighty Beeb. Just goofin' around! All ©’s to Catherine Tregenna for dialogue and situations borrowed from

Comments

[thrace_adams]

Just so everyone knows I started the whole *slaps Jack* trend :) And yeah, for this chapter...*slaps Jack* nope, that's not good enough *stomps on Jack's foot* Poor Ianto, he can come to my house, I'll comfort him, make him forget all about mean old Jack *hugs Ianto*

You know what I loved about this chapter...oh...*slaps John too*

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Yes you did!! I have the beta'd fic to prove it!! You get first slap after every chap sweetie. *hugs*

OOoo! Foot stomping too? And from Cave-Buffy again! Poor Jack. *grins* He totally had it coming, didn't he? Ugh - off to bed. Hopefully will get to work some more on ficcage tomorrow. Roomie going away for weekend. Me time!! :D

[ishouldntreally]

Poor Jack. Nothing a good slap can't fix though :)

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*slaps Jack*

...waits...

Hmm, he's still being a jerk in 59. :( Oh well, I'm bringing in a new OMC to take Ianto's mind off of stuff...he'll be here soon. :D

[hab318princess]

Poor Ianto, all confused!

You are catching their voices so well and I'm looking forward to part 59!

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Oh thank you so much!! That's one of my favorite things to hear. :D

[angelzbabe1989]

*bitch slaps Jack a few times for good measure*

Stupid Man - how dare he treat Ianto that way!! Grrrr....

*huggles Ianto*

[buttononthetop]

Right there with ya sistah! I must admit, I'm channeling some ex-boyfriends to get Jack to the perfect level of jerkiness. Hey! They were actually good for something! ;)

Glad Ianto's getting lots of huggles, tho. :D

[doctor_addicted]

Gosh, Jack's pretty much out of it, isn't he. I guess John's fate is getting to him on more levels than one: John's being out of his time, alone and having lost his family for good... Still, I wish he'd let Ianto in on it, at least a bit :(

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Yeah, I'm looking forward to Season 2 when Jack starts to open up a bit. It's hard to write him in so much pain and refusing to let anyone help. Especially since it hurts Ianto so much too! *huggles boyz*