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adafrog May 20 2007, 23:50:19 UTC
Great.

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burntcopper May 21 2007, 13:03:08 UTC
yay!

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neadods May 21 2007, 00:05:22 UTC
What a chilling ending!

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burntcopper May 21 2007, 13:02:34 UTC
huh, really? thought it was fairly standard for this style of fic. Glad it gave you the shivers.

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neadods May 21 2007, 13:42:50 UTC
Standard doesn't mean not creepy. :>

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jwaneeta May 21 2007, 05:55:52 UTC
Great story, and the end was really impressive!

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burntcopper May 21 2007, 12:59:09 UTC
:g: thankyou!

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jamjar May 21 2007, 12:21:49 UTC
I love this. I liked Yvonne and I was pretty disappointed when she died, in that way where the death itself isn't a disappointment, just the fact that it severely cuts down on your chance of seeing them on the show in the future. I like that Yvonne doesn't really change her atttitude. She might think more of him as she works with him more, but her basic personality, view on the world and Torch Wood, is still there.

He swaggered into the new employees debriefing, ego entering the room at least eight steps ahead of him, dressed as though he'd stepped out of a Battle of Britain film, which screams affectation, and proceeded to sexually harass the entire room within about 3 seconds of his entering.

He was on his good beahviour, wait until he was actually in the room. It's so much more disconcerting when he does it through the walls.

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burntcopper May 21 2007, 12:48:49 UTC
Yay, you liked it! Channelling Yvonne is just... way too much fun, since she's got such a defined character. I think we need flashback eps of Jack's history in Torchwood, including clashes with Yvonne. And we're sure Ianto has had to suffer through those times when Jack's projecting. Especially when he's trying to talk to tourists.

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laurab1 May 21 2007, 12:59:51 UTC
I love this, especially the swaggering and the last line. Great!

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burntcopper May 21 2007, 13:23:02 UTC
one should always swagger, darling.

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