Fic : Dinosaur (Torchwood)

[burntcopper]

Title : Dinosaur

Comments

[terrylj]

Ooh, I really like this. It rings very true to what we saw of her character. The last line is chilling.

and proceeded to sexually harass the entire room within about 3 seconds of his entering.

Hee! Jack really can sexually harass an entire group of people just by walking into the room, can't he?

[bodlon]

Well, you know the lines between him and Nine on the Game Station:

Jack: Nice to meet you, Lynda Moss.
The Doctor: Would you stop flirting? I'm trying to concentrate.
Jack: I was just saying hello.
The Doctor: For you, that's flirting.

[terrylj]

You know, as many times as I've laughed over that scene, I just now realized the implication that Jack flirting (with someone else) makes the Doctor unable to concentrate.

Thankyouverymuch...

[bodlon]

*grin* Indeed.

[burntcopper]

thankyou! This last line appears to be rather popular.

[sunstar77]

I never liked Yvonne, but that last line is quite sad.

[burntcopper]

I adore Yvonne, but mostly for the fact that she's so well-defined and well-drawn - you're not *meant* to like her as she's clearly cast in the villain role, but earns the status due to her arrogance and oversight. :muses: many people appear to like the last line. huh.

[sunstar77]

You're right. She is a very well deinfied character. Maybe it's cause the last line is so sudden and a bit unexpected.

[celievamp]

excellent piece. and that last line... killer

[burntcopper]

:g: glad you liked.

[crabby_lioness]

That sums up Yvonne and Jack quite well.

[burntcopper]

ooo, great. One day we will get flashback eps of seeing them interact. One day.