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Fic: Dulce et Decorum Est [the mustard gas remix]

Sep 13, 2009 01:24

Title: Dulce et Decorum Est [the mustard gas remix]
Author: Britomart_is
Original Story: Always by hunters_retreat
Rating: R
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Notes: 2600 words. Written for kamikazeremix. Evil-ish!Winchesters, character death, blood and gore.
Summary: Sam saves Dean. Dean saves Sam.

( The table is a door, taken off the hinges and propped on sawhorses. The door once belonged to a cottage in the nearest town, with chipped white paint and dead roses climbing a trellis. )

my fic

Comments 38

englishblue September 16 2009, 04:05:23 UTC

You did a really brillant job here. Not a false step and it carried me along without a pause. I had tears in my eyes by the end.

britomart_is September 17 2009, 05:11:08 UTC

Thank you so much!

roxymissrose September 16 2009, 05:09:24 UTC

And in the morning: Dean will dress Sam, solemnly buttoning his shirt like lacing him into his armor.

What a *beautiful* line!

britomart_is September 17 2009, 05:11:24 UTC

♥!

wild_shadowfire September 16 2009, 05:49:44 UTC

This may sound cruel, but somehow I really wanted Dean to find out that Sam knew Dean was going to kill him. Oh yeah. :P

britomart_is September 17 2009, 05:11:43 UTC

I entirely understand the impulse. :)

layne67 September 16 2009, 09:09:21 UTC

Awesome. I was half-afraid that Dean would kill Sam and that would be it, then - Dean is crying and bleeding -- his blood running warm over Sam and joining Sam's own where it soaks into the sheets. - and I could breathe again.

Painful, yes, but the good kind you know. And Sam and Dean dead is how I envisioned the show to end. Unless they decide to make a movie later on of course :)

britomart_is September 24 2009, 07:20:51 UTC

Crossing my fingers for the movie option! :D

riyirowe September 16 2009, 16:41:52 UTC

I just read both this and the remix, and I loved both! God, just, love! It hurts, but it is so...them! I love that this just adds to the original, and takes absolutely nothing away! Gorgeous. And I know that it won't happen, but my brain is clamoring for the next part. About them climbing back to Earth, and what happens then. *sighs wistfully* I can dream, right?

britomart_is September 24 2009, 07:21:29 UTC

Thank you, I'm so glad you enjoyed it!