Three Times Jensen Was Injured and Cougar Was There for Him. 1/1, Cougar/Jensen 

Jan 23, 2011 15:33

Title: Three Times Jensen Was Injured  and Cougar Was There for Him ( Read more... )

slash, thelosers, cougar/jensen

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miss_speller January 23 2011, 20:55:40 UTC
:D Man, IMO you totally got Jensen down! That last paragraph was so epic. Also Pooch's reaction was so great.

Also. Jolene and Aisha. And Cougar. Heh. Sorry just a bit incoherent over here.

There were a couple of tiny spelling errors but I was enjoying it way too much for them to be bothersome C:

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brevanna03 January 30 2011, 22:09:45 UTC
Thanks :D, I'm glad you liked the characterization of Jensen, he and I are both pretty ... odd, so I adore writing him.

Oh I'm sorry about those, even with a beta it's hard to combat my poor spelling :), but thank you for telling me, I'm going to go through and see if I can fix them.

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cholomunkers January 23 2011, 20:58:35 UTC
"Jensen." It is the most beautiful and Mexican thing he's ever heard.

^ gold!

Then he makes a douchey tsk, tsk sound.

^ I made themost awesome sound laughing at that line.

Pooch stops laughing immediately and stares at Jolene in horror.

Love your Jensen, sounded just right to me!
Your Cougar is wonderful too, kinda naughty, totally like that.

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brevanna03 January 30 2011, 23:42:21 UTC
Thank you! And naughty Cougar is always the best Cougar ;)

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brevanna03 January 30 2011, 23:43:08 UTC
Thank you very much!

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rin2x January 24 2011, 00:30:49 UTC
Longest AKA title I've ever seen. *lol*

Love how Cougar got between Clay & Jensen there at the end. He's such a good boyfriend!

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brevanna03 January 30 2011, 23:47:30 UTC
lol ikr? It was originally me describing the story to a friend and I just got so attached to the aka title I had to keep it :D

Very true! He is the best boyfriend, no questions asked. And thanks for commenting!

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bookstorequeer January 24 2011, 01:35:31 UTC
Wicked. Your characterizations are perfect and I love how you managed to slip Jolene in there at the end! Classic! Loved it.

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brevanna03 January 31 2011, 00:00:55 UTC
Thank you! And dude I totally had to slip Jolene in there, fanfic is making me adore her :D

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