1. I love the first two stanzas, and especially their closing line. And pretty much all of it, but those things are the best.
2. I love your poetry in general. I wish I could write like you do! Actually, the rhythm in this one sounds like how my poetry tends to go, come to think of it, the flowing lines, la la la, last line duhn. (I think my prof called it "a lovely dissonance" or something.) But you actually write good stuff!
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2. I love your poetry in general. I wish I could write like you do! Actually, the rhythm in this one sounds like how my poetry tends to go, come to think of it, the flowing lines, la la la, last line duhn. (I think my prof called it "a lovely dissonance" or something.) But you actually write good stuff!
3. I love YOU.
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Thank you. My poetic muse comes and goes in spurts; he is all kinds of amusement, but not very dependable/trustworthy.
I love you too!!
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