fic - break

[brandywine421]

fandom: the oc
title: break
rating: R for violence
disclaimer: I don't own anything OC related.
author's note: I am dedicating this to smc36 because she is awesome and it is her birthday!!

part one
part two
part three

Comments

[jassylou]

I believe he will go back,and try to stop those things happening.

He'd never leave his baby girl and if needed he'd get her help.Because thats what Ryan does,he saves people. I'm almost sure the voice is of an angel albeit a bad one called Dawn.(Devils Whore!!)

Please Lord help him pull through and still find peace?.
Yeah that voice is a fallen angel,could she be anything else with her track record?!
Even drifting towards the light Ryan will not forget the happiness and love he has with/for his family and friends.He'll realise the voice is the Devils Whore.

I'm right into this .Totally enthralled and engrossed.

It's magic!! Thanks for the quick update brandy.:D

[finlee]

Yikes! I'm not sure what I'm more worried about - Ryan deciding to die or what he's being asked as being the future!

[english27]

Aww, now I feel sorry for Taylor, she doesn't mean to be crazy. At first I thought it was post natal depression but she had always been taking them.... I'm sad for her even though she stabbed Ryan!.
Yes Ryan, GO BACK!
Great update.

[makingway415]

noooo...he has to go back. :)

[kazfloyd]

Ryan go back!! He wouldn't leave them if people needed him. I feel sorry for Taylor, now.

Very well done!!