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starsandsea November 23 2011, 19:27:24 UTC
*hugs Bruce and Clark* I don't know which one has been hurt worse! Poor Bruce, thinking Clark was dead, and poor Clark, being so hurt, and thinking Bruce didn't want him anymore... At least Bruce can see again. *hugs them both*

Thank you for writing this, and sharing it with us, Brady! I really enjoyed reading it. :)

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bradygirl_12 November 23 2011, 20:13:34 UTC
*hugs Bruce and Clark* I don't know which one has been hurt worse! Poor Bruce, thinking Clark was dead, and poor Clark, being so hurt, and thinking Bruce didn't want him anymore... At least Bruce can see again. *hugs them both*

I really put the boys through the wringer in this one! They're damaged but will heal with each other's love. :)

Thank you for writing this, and sharing it with us, Brady! I really enjoyed reading it. :)

Thanks for reading and commenting, Star! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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tmelange November 25 2011, 15:05:12 UTC
Bravo on finishing this! This story seems very familiar to me, and in reading the comments, I see it's a play on a comics storyline. You did it justice, definitely. The story had a lot of emotion, especially from the point where Bruce relocated to Maine. Great job with this. You should be proud.

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bradygirl_12 November 25 2011, 17:16:11 UTC
Bravo on finishing this! This story seems very familiar to me, and in reading the comments, I see it's a play on a comics storyline.

*nods*

The story really stayed with me all these years, so I decided to take the basic premise and substitute Bruce for Lois and then put my own spin on it. It was truly a powerful story when it was first published and still retains that power today.

You did it justice, definitely. The story had a lot of emotion, especially from the point where Bruce relocated to Maine. Great job with this. You should be proud.

*beams*

Thanks, T.! I'm happy that you read and commented and liked! :)

I love understated drama with dollops of emotion as in Clark losing it after Bruce couldn't kiss him and so on. I do like to challenge the readers to see if they get the flow of things without always stating it outright. If I do my job, people can figure it out! :)

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saavikam77 January 5 2012, 17:52:24 UTC
I managed to read this one all in one go (thank you, tabs!), and HOLY COW! O_O Poor Clark! Poor Bruce! *wibble*

For a love story, this was so utterly tragic that I almost couldn't keep the tears away. *wibbles some more*

Gods, what a fantastic story, hon. *applauds wildly*

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bradygirl_12 January 5 2012, 18:18:07 UTC
I managed to read this one all in one go (thank you, tabs!), and HOLY COW! O_O Poor Clark! Poor Bruce! *wibble*

Yeah, I really poured the angst on in this one. :)

For a love story, this was so utterly tragic that I almost couldn't keep the tears away. *wibbles some more*

I'm glad it evoked strong emotions from you! That was what I was going for.

Gods, what a fantastic story, hon. *applauds wildly*

*beams*

Thank you, Saavi! And thank you for taking the time to read and comment on this Epic! :)

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quiltdiva February 14 2012, 06:41:12 UTC
Wow, oh, wow! Such wonderful romantic moments- I especially loved when Clark took Bruce flying and popped the question! Also the boys just being happy together. Then the terrible grief and despair. Awesome. Your use of Dick was a delight. I loved this. YAY! :)

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bradygirl_12 February 15 2012, 19:51:44 UTC
Wow, oh, wow! Such wonderful romantic moments- I especially loved when Clark took Bruce flying and popped the question! Also the boys just being happy together.

I had to write in the happiness, considering all the tough times.

Then the terrible grief and despair. Awesome.

I'm glad so many people read this. It wasn't an easy read (or write!)

Your use of Dick was a delight. I loved this. YAY! :)

Thanks, luv! And Dick is always a delight. ;)

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