I had a wonderful grin on my face through the entire story. I'm really enjoying this one. I don''t see how you can end something so wonderful at three chapters. *grin*
I really like the relationship that grew between Arthur and Lance so quickly. What do they say about finding one's soulmate. You just know. Wonderful chapter honey!
I had a wonderful grin on my face through the entire story. I'm really enjoying this one. I don''t see how you can end something so wonderful at three chapters. *grin*
It was a struggle! :)
Glad you're enjoying this, hon! :)
I really like the relationship that grew between Arthur and Lance so quickly. What do they say about finding one's soulmate. You just know. Wonderful chapter honey!
It just seemed as if the boys would connect quickly this time around. Must be magic! ;)
And so it was that Lancelot stayed on, helping out as he kept himself in fighting shape, though of course the golden boy he slept with was the jewel in the crown. Nice line!
“No! Never. They just fear people finding out.” With good reason, my sweet Angel. True!
“Still think I am not a devil?” “With all my heart.” Arthur smiled shyly. “Verily, you are a silken talker.” “But a sincere one.” I liked this dialogue. :)
“He must be quite entertaining between the sheets.” OMG! Poor boys. :D *pets them*
“A star? Not a cross?” “Most assuredly a star.” Of course - it must have been a star!
I believe your son should see a bit of the world before settling here.” Well said.
This is a wonderfully written story! I love Lancelot. Arthur saved him and he is so determined to keep Arthur and his secret safe. And Arthur saving and carrying Lancelot - They two are amazing together. Wow, and Martha - you wrote her excellently in this story! Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :) Thanks for sharing.
And so it was that Lancelot stayed on, helping out as he kept himself in fighting shape, though of course the golden boy he slept with was the jewel in the crown. Nice line!
Thank you! :)
“No! Never. They just fear people finding out.” With good reason, my sweet Angel. True!
Oh, yes.
“Still think I am not a devil?” “With all my heart.” Arthur smiled shyly. “Verily, you are a silken talker.” “But a sincere one.” I liked this dialogue. :)
*beams*
It really was a nice bit of dialogue to write! :)
“He must be quite entertaining between the sheets.” OMG! Poor boys. :D *pets them*
*laughs*
“A star? Not a cross?” “Most assuredly a star.” Of course - it must have been a star!
Yes, most assuredly! :)
I believe your son should see a bit of the world before settling here.” Well said.
He needs to see what's out there first.
This is a wonderfully written story! I love Lancelot. Arthur saved him and he is so determined to keep Arthur and his secret safe. And Arthur saving and carrying Lancelot - They two are amazing together. Wow, and
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Oh, so now Lancelot knows! If not everything yet, lol. And Arthur doesn't know - he's going to be terribly shocked when he finds out who he is! *pets him* I loved the Kent's in this chapter too. :)
Oh, so now Lancelot knows! If not everything yet, lol. And Arthur doesn't know - he's going to be terribly shocked when he finds out who he is! *pets him* I loved the Kent's in this chapter too. :)
All kinds of secrets are coming out! ;)
I can't wait for the last chapter! :)
Thank you, Star! I'll do my best to wrap this up before I start typing up new stories. My notebook queue is ridiculously long. :)
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I had a wonderful grin on my face through the entire story. I'm really enjoying this one. I don''t see how you can end something so wonderful at three chapters. *grin*
I really like the relationship that grew between Arthur and Lance so quickly. What do they say about finding one's soulmate. You just know. Wonderful chapter honey!
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I had a wonderful grin on my face through the entire story. I'm really enjoying this one. I don''t see how you can end something so wonderful at three chapters. *grin*
It was a struggle! :)
Glad you're enjoying this, hon! :)
I really like the relationship that grew between Arthur and Lance so quickly. What do they say about finding one's soulmate. You just know. Wonderful chapter honey!
It just seemed as if the boys would connect quickly this time around. Must be magic! ;)
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Your language is beautiful and feels so authentic. Sheer poetry, I swear. I love the complete trust between the two of them.
“Still think I am not a devil?”
“With all my heart.”
SO cute! The boys are just adorable together. &hearts
And the Kents are perfect too.
“But not to worry, Martha. I would never reveal your son’s secret.”
“He must be quite entertaining between the sheets.”
LOL She's quite feisty, isn't she? I love Martha and you write her really well.
I can't wait to see what you have in store next. I'm sad that there's only one more part, but all good things have to come to an end, right?
Fantastic job! :)
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Your language is beautiful and feels so authentic. Sheer poetry, I swear. I love the complete trust between the two of them.
*blushes*
Your words of praise are like silver bells to my ears, my dear. :)
“Still think I am not a devil?”
“With all my heart.”
SO cute! The boys are just adorable together. ♥
And the Kents are perfect too.
*nods*
The boys and Jonathan and Martha are made of win! :)
“But not to worry, Martha. I would never reveal your son’s secret.”
“He must be quite entertaining between the sheets.”
LOL She's quite feisty, isn't she? I love Martha and you write her really well.
*laughs*
I figured that as quiet as the boys were, that cottage is pretty small! ;)
I can't wait to see what you have in store next. I'm sad that there's only one more part, but all good things have to come to an end, right?
Fantastic job! :)
Thank you! I'll try to get the final chapter up before the weekend. :)
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Nice line!
“No! Never. They just fear people finding out.”
With good reason, my sweet Angel.
True!
“Still think I am not a devil?”
“With all my heart.”
Arthur smiled shyly. “Verily, you are a silken talker.”
“But a sincere one.”
I liked this dialogue. :)
“He must be quite entertaining between the sheets.”
OMG! Poor boys. :D *pets them*
“A star? Not a cross?”
“Most assuredly a star.”
Of course - it must have been a star!
I believe your son should see a bit of the world before settling here.”
Well said.
This is a wonderfully written story! I love Lancelot. Arthur saved him and he is so determined to keep Arthur and his secret safe. And Arthur saving and carrying Lancelot - They two are amazing together. Wow, and Martha - you wrote her excellently in this story!
Great job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)
Thanks for sharing.
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Nice line!
Thank you! :)
“No! Never. They just fear people finding out.”
With good reason, my sweet Angel.
True!
Oh, yes.
“Still think I am not a devil?”
“With all my heart.”
Arthur smiled shyly. “Verily, you are a silken talker.”
“But a sincere one.”
I liked this dialogue. :)
*beams*
It really was a nice bit of dialogue to write! :)
“He must be quite entertaining between the sheets.”
OMG! Poor boys. :D *pets them*
*laughs*
“A star? Not a cross?”
“Most assuredly a star.”
Of course - it must have been a star!
Yes, most assuredly! :)
I believe your son should see a bit of the world before settling here.”
Well said.
He needs to see what's out there first.
This is a wonderfully written story! I love Lancelot. Arthur saved him and he is so determined to keep Arthur and his secret safe. And Arthur saving and carrying Lancelot - They two are amazing together. Wow, and ( ... )
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I can't wait for the last chapter! :)
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All kinds of secrets are coming out! ;)
I can't wait for the last chapter! :)
Thank you, Star! I'll do my best to wrap this up before I start typing up new stories. My notebook queue is ridiculously long. :)
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Thanks, sweetie! The boys make it easy. :)
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