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borborygmus5000

Penance: Prologue

Jan 31, 2013 01:54

Title: Penance
Pairing: YunJae
Rating: R
Length: Chaptered
Genre: Angst, drama
Summary: Yunho once chose kinship over love, and is now willing to do anything as penance for his act of betrayal.
( He had trained himself to harden his heart )

fic: penance

Comments 60

hyunnyb January 31 2013, 04:28:07 UTC

Intriguing start and very well crafted, I hope you'll continue and that your confidence will grow, I'm looking forward to reading more!

borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 05:11:06 UTC

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment, I will do my best and just let the creative juices lead the way..

octopuskimchi January 31 2013, 05:56:16 UTC

I'm intrigued by the plot, would love to read a chaptered fic of this , if you are not comfortable with a long fic why not do a mini one? Then you won't feel pressured

borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 08:17:54 UTC

It will be hard to compact the plot I have in mind into a mini. In fact, i think that would be more difficult. I have always found it challenging to express myself economically. Oh wells, I shall gear myself up. Thanks for reading, I just posted chapter one (:

crystaldee January 31 2013, 08:53:33 UTC

Ooooh..interesting prologue.
I like it.
Hum....YH made JJ stay in the cell for 10 years minus 2 years?
Oh no...then YH must pay! A WHOLE LOT MORE for making JJ suffer~!! T___T

Waiting for the next part ^____^

borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 09:04:06 UTC

I just posted the next chapter (: And thanks for reading.

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borborygmus5000 January 31 2013, 10:29:46 UTC

I can't say what happened now, but thank you for reading and commenting (: Chapter One is now up. I hope you enjoy that one as much as you did the prologue (:

junsu_dbsk January 31 2013, 12:16:22 UTC

i love the prologue already! a good start from u! definitely will be expecting more...