Here he comes to save the day

[bookaddict43]

Title: Here he comes to save the day
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Mal/Jayne
Rating: PG for a serious lack of sex
Disclaimer: Firefly and all its related characters are the property of Joss Whedon
Word count: 2165
Comments: Written for the Mal/Jayne ficathon at shiny_hats. Prompt #71 Instead of Zoe spearheading the rescue on Niska's station for Wash, Jayne

Comments

[ladytalon1]

Eeeee! *flappy hands* They're nose to nose and there might or might not be some serious groping going on under that table!

Still can't believe the lack of sex - that there is just downright unsettlin'. ;) I really love the imagery of Jayne looking at Mal from beneath his lashes though *swoon*

[bookaddict43]

Well the sex will come later when these two are more comfortable admitting it :)

Nose to nose is a good start and thank you so much for your help!! Jayne and those lashes are always swoon worthy I think...

[mosca]

Oh, very nice. I like the way the whole mood of "War Stories" changes when this is Jayne's motivation. Awesome!

[bookaddict43]

Thank you :) I was hoping Jayne's look at events would sound a bit different!

[mercsgoodgirl]

I agree with Katie -- you done well, although more smut might have been fun. Still, J/M undertable footsie is all manner of intriguing.

[bookaddict43]

Undertable footsie is a good start for the smut I think! I'm glad you think I did well :)

[xx_squish_xx]

Good job on this one. You really did well taking that episode and changing it to fit this prompt. I liked that you brought in some of the dialogue from the original, but then combined it with new stuff for this story. :D

[bookaddict43]

I had fun with that dialogue - trying to make it fit and all! Of course I had to watch the episode to add further atmostphere too :D

[anxiety_junkie]

“I was worried,” Jayne burst out. “You ain’t paid me for the last job yet.”

Hee! I loved how you managed to insert Jayne into some of Zoe's lines, that was smoothly done. *sigh* And here I am, reading another 'ship I don't read because you wrote it. What is it about you? *g*

[bookaddict43]

Trust Jayne to use money as an excuse!

I had fun doing the dialogue swap, I'm glad you think it worked.

Wow! You read it because I wrote it? That makes me feel all manner of accomplished *giggles*.