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Apr 16, 2007 21:51

Title: Maybe
Characters: Jack (mentions of Angela/Jack)
Rated: PG
Word Count:  537
Summary: Jack knew what he'd seen, and now he couldn't go fast enough to shake the memory.
A/N: Spur-of-the-moment angst-like fic that just happens to take place in a car. Enjoy it.

Maybe Angela had had a valid reason for what she did. Maybe it was a mistake - large, but ( Read more... )

challenge 02: in the car

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ladyrowansplace April 17 2007, 00:59:23 UTC
AH! NO!!!!!!

My own fault - your writing is so good, I ignored the angst warning....

but still - NO!!!!!

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callieach April 17 2007, 01:04:02 UTC
Umm, thanks, I think?
I ended it where how I did because I knew people would automatically assume that. *feels evil*
Thanks for the comment!

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plazmah April 17 2007, 01:09:58 UTC
OMG.

OMGOMGOMG.

Quite possibly one of the best things you've ever written. So angsty and sad and OMGANGSTY!

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callieach April 17 2007, 01:11:37 UTC
Tee-hee.
Plaz, your enthusiasm makes me giddy.
Thanks for the comment.

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kimberkatie April 17 2007, 01:33:06 UTC
I lied. How could I go enjoy dinner when I knew another one of your fab fics was awaiting me?

OMG-seriously. Yah! Angst! No, dead Jack, but .. OMG angst! Lovely little fic. Lovely, lovely, lovely. You know me, I love my angst! Poor Angela. You oughta write a follow up from her persepctive (what am I, your muse??). Bet she's gonna feel guilty.

Poor Jack. Poor Angela. No, wait ... BAD Angela! How dare she throw Jack away like that? *raises hand* ... Ooh! I'll take him!

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callieach April 17 2007, 01:38:50 UTC
I absolutely adore how everyone who reads this freaks out about Jack dying. I didn't kill him. You did. In your heads. When I wrote this, I thought his cell battery died, but none of you seem to see it from that perspective. =p

Oh, and Kimber, please decide who you're feeling sorry for. Not that you're getting Jack, anyway. *snort*

Enjoy supper and thanks for da fic love, chica!

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kimberkatie April 17 2007, 01:50:00 UTC
I absolutely adore how everyone who reads this freaks out about Jack dying. I didn't kill him. You did. In your heads. When I wrote this, I thought his cell battery died, but none of you seem to see it from that perspective. =p

See? That's the angsty girl in me. I read it like he died, and never got to hear the message. But you're right ... I guess his battery could have just died and he never got to hear her. Afterall, it is your fic, right?? ;P

Oh, and Kimber, please decide who you're feeling sorry for.

Story of my life lately! I finally saw the last 2 eps of GA, and I have no idea who to feel *more* sorry for: Callie, George, or (yes, yes) Izzie. Hey ... George was just as involved in the drunksex as Izzie was.

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callieach April 17 2007, 01:52:47 UTC
Afterall, it is your fic, right?? ;P - Yes. Mine. All mine. *holds fic protectively to chest*

Ay, but is Izzy married? I think freaking not.

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buffyangellvr23 April 17 2007, 04:00:12 UTC
ack he better be okay...more, do a sequel! *pleads with you* *ahem* anyway, nice work :)

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greenovalfruit April 20 2007, 14:16:09 UTC
AAH! SCARY UN-NICE!

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