Lost Drabble for valhalla37

Oct 16, 2010 23:40

Title: A Compass to Help You
Rating: PG
Characters: Jacob, Daniel
Word Count: 100
Summary: “Think of it as a place.”
Warnings: None.
Spoilers: Season five/season six.
A/N: For the Sweet Drabblethon II and valhalla37’s prompt Jacob and Daniel - you have to go back.

“Think of it as a place.” )

drabble, fic, lost

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bold_seer October 16 2010, 22:08:08 UTC
Thank you!

If he bought Katie a lunch box, why can't he have met Dan? ;)

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valhalla37 October 18 2010, 01:48:31 UTC
AMAZING!

:D :D :D

Seriously, this is so, so, so awesome. It's so eerie and heartbreaking and I love the idea of Jacob being Daniel's piano teacher. This part in particular -- Daniel’s brain works hard; links his hands, still a child’s, with his eyes, not yet a man’s. He understands, starts playing the part.

Jacob smiles at the final note. -- was just seriously chilling and so incredibly gorgeous. I love this entire thing so much -- THANK YOU, you're awesome. *hugs forever*

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bold_seer October 19 2010, 08:22:20 UTC
It's such a - well, almost a cracky premise, sorry about that! And now I also feel bad because I noticed (almost) everybody wrote fic(let)s of more than a hundred words. But I'm a traditionalist; a drabble for a drabblethon! ;)

Thank you, it was a really good prompt! :)

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