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[Fic]["Soft" - Aizen/Hinamori]

Aug 04, 2007 17:21

Title: Soft
Author: kiyuu
Pairing: Aizen/Hinamori
Rating: R, maybe?
Spoilers: End of Soul Society arc to be safe.
Notes: Written for and x-posted to 40_loves My "Hina-in-HM" muse is still going strong. :Db And this is the first time I've written anything with such a high rating. Please be gentle. T__T

( One thing Aizen loves about Hinamori )

hinamori, aizen, aizen/hinamori

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kiyuu August 4 2007, 22:21:00 UTC

fylkjgf oh man I'm glad you liked. ♥ I'm so self-concious about my writing sometimes, and I was very nervous about this one. XD

Oooh, yes, good point. I'll go tweak that now.

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kiyuu August 4 2007, 22:34:27 UTC

Believe it or not, I don't have a beta. Well, not for this one, at least. I've had a couple of other people read over the stuff I've posted here before.

Thanks. ^_^ I'm getting into the swing of fanfiction again, and I've got a bunch of other promps from 40_loves to do, so I'll definitely be posting here more often.

greeneyedlady August 4 2007, 22:36:10 UTC

That was hot. *fans self* When you feel up to it, you should definitely try something longer.

silverharmony August 5 2007, 05:08:53 UTC

T__T; I hope that wasn't too bad.

"Too bad"? It was beautiful! I think I've read almost every fic featuring this pairing (I love them to death) and only a handful of them capture the tragic beauty as wonderfully as you've done!

Thank you so much for sharing this with us :D

kiyuu August 5 2007, 05:32:43 UTC

Oh man, thank you so much for commenting. T_T ♥ I'm glad people like my stuff....

I like to think that in his own twisted little way, Aizen does somewhat care for her. I mean, when you think about it, despite what he did being cruel and messed up, it was a sort of act of kindness. XD; He wanted to spare her a painful life of living without him D:!

silverharmony August 5 2007, 09:47:10 UTC

I agree, that's part of what makes it such a deliciously tragic pairing. I only hope that in the very very end, in the final battle (not necessarily in this arc), she has a big part. Ichigo fighting Aizen wouldn't be half as interesting as Hinamori's interaction with the man she'd admired and respected for years only to betray her.

Oh, the angst. ♥

kiyuu August 5 2007, 16:09:31 UTC

I think she WILL have a big part, whether it be soon or later. I don't think Kubo would have her still be completely loyal and trusting to him unless he was planning something. Whether she finds out of he really is evil or not... I dunno. but I don't think that'll stop her from loving him.

trissacarsama March 26 2011, 03:54:10 UTC

That was awesome and hot! :)