HIMYM FF: Out of the Rain [Ted/Barney, R]

[black_eyedgirl]

Yet more reposting from oxoniensis's Porn Battle VI. Sorry.

Title: Out of the Rain
Fandom: How I Met Your Mother
Pairing: Ted/Barney
Rating: R
Length: 1000 words
Disclaimer: All belongs to Craig Thomas and Carter Bays
Spoilers: Set probably sometime post-S2, because we don't have S3 yet.
Summary: Ted leapt up, raising the half-full coffee mug above his head

Comments

[xjessica_faithx]

I love this so much!
This would indeed be the best way to spend a rainy Sunday!

Love this so hard! It has a lovely flow and is almost poetic to me.

He made Barney-noises into Ted’s mouth - Ted’s heard the first one before, after years of being Barney’s wingman. The second one is… familiar, like maybe Barney picked up his phone in the middle of something and Ted remembers the sound. Ted shifts to bring them closer together, trying to chase heat into Barney’s skin. That’s a new noise: soft and slipping to vulnerable, no words.

Oh last line = WIN

[black_eyedgirl]

Well, it was mostly written because it will not stop raining here! Rainy-day fluff seemed the best way do fix my blues :) I'm glad other people enjoyed it too.

It has a lovely flow and is almost poetic to me.
That's so nice to hear - thank you!

[typhon_9]

oh, this is niice. I love the description of that kiss at the end. It's really... just wow. especially... this line: That’s a new noise: soft and slipping to vulnerable, no words. There’s a second where Ted’s a little scared, looking at Barney and wondering if he’s broken. I adore it. The whole fic is absolutely adorable. I really like the picture of Barney busting through the window. So cute!

[black_eyedgirl]

*g* I have no idea why my head thought Barney needed to make his entrance via breaking-and-entering, but once it was written, I couldn't change it!

I'm glad the kiss worked okay - it's an odd fandom for porn battling in, so the tone was funny. Thanks for the feedback :)

[northern_rain]

Adorable and brilliant, love this pairing.

[black_eyedgirl]

Thank you for commenting - I love the pairing too, and there's too little fic!

[entangled_now]

This is utterly brilliant and you have great voices!

[black_eyedgirl]

*g* The voices came easier than I thought they would - though Barney still eludes me a bit - partially because there's been a lot of HIMYM rewatching recently! And thank you :)

[ebcdic]

Barney sputtered at him, eyes wide with the sort of confusion that Ted could normally only provoke by threatening to accompany a new girlfriend to her high school reunion, or a family thanksgiving.

perfect.

[black_eyedgirl]

*g* Barney confusion is fab, but it does mostly seem to be provoked by violations of the dating rulebook!