Comments | black_eyedgirl: House MD FF: "Transference" 7-9/9 (House/Chase, R)

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House MD FF: "Transference" 7-9/9 (House/Chase, R)

Apr 02, 2006 18:16

Title: Transference 7-9/9
Fandom: House, MD
Pairing: House/Chase
Rating: R for violence, domestic abuse, allusions of rape.
Genre: Angst/Drama
Length: These parts - 6000 words. Total length is 14,000 words
Disclaimer: House and all its characters are, sadly, not mine.
Summary: The bruise was purple, just fading to green, and it stood stark against Chase’s ( Read more... )

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Comments 17

jaayx April 2 2006, 21:02:37 UTC

Yay~ You've complete the whole story! I've been following it since first chapter and I really really like it. Thank You for it!

Hope you write more about HousexChase ^___^

p.s.: I think you were right on the rather confusing chapter 9... but it was alright after I read it the 2-3 times ^^'

black_eyedgirl April 8 2006, 22:08:52 UTC

Thank you for the feedback! I know the last chapter is tricksy, but I'm glad it makes sense on the read-back. :-)

anonymous April 2 2006, 22:46:23 UTC

Too confusing to even read properly. Sorry

laminy April 2 2006, 22:56:20 UTC

I just read the entire series in a sitting (I've been doing that a lot lately), and I must say...I am speechless.

Wow. This is so good, and it's completely their voices, and I can see them doing everything, and- wow.

I've got a couple favourite lines from these chapters. First:

House leaned over and pulled Chase’s bangs away from his face. ‘No doctor has hair like this.’

‘Yeah,’ Chase drawled, ‘I’ve been meaning to tell you my medical degree’s a forgery. The time never seemed right to bring it up.’

Then there's this one: ‘He didn’t make me do anything. I was bored. Or he tricked me, I can’t remember.'

I can see both of those on the show, they're so much like them.

black_eyedgirl April 8 2006, 22:09:35 UTC

Wow to your feedback *basks*

I'm really glad you liked it!

anonymous April 2 2006, 23:09:48 UTC

This fic was complete and utter perfection!

she_devil666 April 3 2006, 02:58:15 UTC

I loved it! Even if it does have a lack of a sex scene. That other person who was confused must not have read the earlier chapters. It really wasn't confusing at all. I realized the last chapter was dating back to the 1st chapter when Tom came in. After that a light bulb went off and I was like 'Ah!' I hope you write more!!!

black_eyedgirl April 8 2006, 22:10:40 UTC

Lol, thanks for understanding the last chapter. I'm a big fan of paralleling, but I knew it wouldn't be instantly obvious, so I'm glad you liked it.