Perfection

May 28, 2014 15:46

Title: Perfection
Rating: PG
Length: 208w
Summary: Kibum is far from perfect.
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oneshots, shorts, jongkey, fluff

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shineeshipper08 May 28 2014, 14:00:23 UTC
Aweh this was adorable :). Really liked the metaphors XD. (I think that's what they're called ._.)

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bittybabo May 30 2014, 07:53:30 UTC
I'n not too sure what they're called either, and i wrote it!
BUT i do think they're called metaphors.
I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for reading!

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shineeshipper08 May 31 2014, 23:58:54 UTC
We'll just go with metaphors then :D
ANYWAYS, whatever they are, they were great so that's all that matters XD.
And you're welcome! Thanks for writing :)

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ddeonajimothae May 28 2014, 14:34:15 UTC
awwww i like it! good work :)

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bittybabo May 30 2014, 07:55:28 UTC
Thank you! I didn't like it all that much myself though... This went through like a million revisions before i sent it to my beta:(
Thank you for reading!

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bittybabo May 30 2014, 08:06:28 UTC
OMG HI YOU'RE SNAZZY_BOP AND MY MIND IS WHIRLING I LOVE MISUNDERSTANDINGS APLENTY AND FOLLOW ME

heheh. *waves to you from the crowd of fans*

but. Right?! I actually read the sonnet for choral speaking this year in class for Book and Music Week(school thing).

I loved how it wasn't something that was all cliche and old and overused like other poems singing praises to their lovers /cough/I serve a mistress whiter than the snow/cough/.

Shakespeare's sonnets make me feel I don't want to feel during class. I am 2000% done. *goes back for more*

Anyway, thank you for taking the time to comment on a newbie's journal like mine... I hope to see you next time! Thank you for reading!

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