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big_pink

SPN fic: Verbal, part II

Apr 15, 2007 17:30

And because LJ likes me so much on my birthday, it's given me the extra-special present of letting me post this oneshot in two parts.

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Supernatural things - demons, witches, sprites - had perverse senses of humor. That ought not to have surprised Sam, but it still did.

Spilling your guts. Very funny.

“You sure this is going to work, Sammy?” Dean ( Read more... )

verbal, supernatural, fanfic

Comments 195

innie_darling April 15 2007, 22:18:25 UTC

Somehow, this was one of the saddest fics I've ever read. Dean is just spilling free here, like pulling an unbearably long rope from his belly, and it hurt that Sam used that against him before catching hold of himself.

big_pink April 16 2007, 02:31:47 UTC

Yep, it's sad. I tried to see it (obviously) from Sam's POV. He can't help himself. Haven't you ever been in that situation? Where someone was telling you something and part of you wants them to shut up and part of you wants them to keep going and afterwards you just feel as though you've eaten this enormous cake whole.

Well, it's happened to me, anyway. LOL.

But, yes, intended to be pointy-funny-hurty.

Happy birthday to you! iyalode April 15 2007, 22:30:03 UTC

Dean's so vulnerable here it hurts. The humour sidetracks us, like Sam, until it doesn't. And then it just scrapes wounds.

Really liked the idea of all the silver in the ground keeping away the mystical stuff.

Re: Happy birthday to you! big_pink April 16 2007, 02:32:46 UTC

Oh, man the SILVER. And no one's (yet) pointed out my Deadwood connections, but it's coming, I'm sure. I'm going to be mining the Comstock Lode some more in the next fic, don't worry.

logovo April 15 2007, 22:58:06 UTC

I need to read this again, I read in big giant gulps sometimes, but I had to first say thank you, this was the highlight of my day :)

big_pink April 16 2007, 02:34:20 UTC

Well, happy as I am to be the highlight of your day -- jesus. You need to get out more! Unless weather near you was like mine: miserable. Nothing makes me happier than writing, so it was really wonderful that I was able to get something out on my birthday. Yeah!

logovo April 16 2007, 02:59:44 UTC

Heheh... I've been working. Woe. But tax season is almost over and I won't have to look at another tax form for . . . actually only a few days.

big_pink April 16 2007, 13:05:01 UTC

Now you see, tax day in Canada is end of April. So I can do that...now, I guess. Dang.

a2zmom April 15 2007, 23:19:17 UTC

wonderf ul second part. A lot of it is still funny

Dean watched as Sam sat down on the toilet bowl cover and gestured for him to face him. “I’ve had more than one woman tell me that it was sexually stimulating when anyone touched their belly button, so maybe you’re right.”

Sam looked up. “You keep up with this and I will gut you.”

because Dean's subconcious is free form at best, but, of course, what Sam really wants isn't something Dean wants to give. I like that at the end, Sam realizes that the only way to end it all is to give Dean emotional honesty. Although, I wonder what's going to happen next. I expect this will go under the heading of things that will never be discussed. Or, we move right into Wincest.

big_pink April 16 2007, 02:35:59 UTC

I think that in my little world it goes directly under the category of 'things we will never discuss ever, ever again'. But that's just me. Others may take it in another direction, LOL. Hey, I mentioned Snow White twice and Sleeping Beauty once. It's all Disney's fault. Possibly for fucking it up.

a2zmom April 16 2007, 02:43:42 UTC

The one Disney truly fucked was "The Little Mermaid". How many people have any idea that not only didn't the mermaid get the prince but she dies?A lot of Hans Christian Anderson was guaranteed to give children nightmares.

And as long as Sam didn't slip Dean any tongue, it's all good. (What do I know? If you're familiar with AtS, I'm currently writing Angel/Connor. I'm completely corrupted at this point.)

big_pink April 16 2007, 02:55:13 UTC

Oooooh. Disney's treatment of the Little Mermaid was indictable. Really. Someone should have gone to jail.

Oh, it's a slippery slope. All the spn fic is on the continuum. Who am I to fight it?

Happy Birthday, Pinkster! montisello April 15 2007, 23:54:21 UTC

First of all:

Dean's concave navel. Sexiest words ever. OMG.

Second:

Hiding all that angst under comedy and Bonanza! Trying to be tricky now, eh? Great story. I love that Sam was both fascinated and repelled by Dean's mouth diarrhea. I wanna know about those years after Niagra Falls, too!

Re: Happy Birthday, Pinkster! big_pink April 16 2007, 02:37:23 UTC

"Dean's concave navel."

Well, yes. I want the t-shirt. Or at least the icon. *looks around for the last birthday present of the day*

Oh the annus horribilis. It's coming, it's coming. I'm just totally teasing those that choose to read my stuff. I'm pure evil that way.

Re: Happy Birthday, Pinkster! montisello April 16 2007, 17:06:04 UTC

And yet you refuse to be spoiled. Can't be evil all the way unless you KNOW.

Re: Happy Birthday, Pinkster! big_pink April 16 2007, 18:31:00 UTC

I take it all back. YOU are evil. "Evil!" *points* No one's looking, are they? You're just being all evil with your stinky spoilers and general evilness. *sigh*

I'm not going to do it, not even if spoilers include...Dean's concave navel.