Chapter 10/Over, Over, Over
Destination: Niagara Falls, of course. Gen, PG-13. Complete. Horror/drama. A smidgen of angst. A big freakin’ smidgen of angst.
Travel Advisory: High body count. Blood. General wretchedness. Unforgivably wordy.
Cabin Crew: I never leave home without them --
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Ok so - this was just amazing. I am incoherent and just flailing about. That was intense and messy and not everything was ok at the end but realistically when do things ever tie up neatly?
I'll comment later with more feedback when my verbal skills come back but yeah: WOW.
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I hadn't even finished posting at the Pit and I saw it had come in and did my spastic flappy dance.
I aim to please cause i am just that awesome! No seriously you deserve all the comments you get. This was an fantastic end to a truly fantastic fic. You really get Sam and Dean and their messy, intense but so damn loving relationship. They hurt each other so much but they love each other more than that and that really comes across here.
“It must have been shit, left with him. After.”
“It wasn’t being left with him, you fucking moron. Shit. Any day of the week I’d have done that. That wasn’t it.”You hit the damn nail on the head. I think a surprising number of people don't realize that Dean doesn't regret staying with his dad. Now they (and Sam) know ( ... )
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Fluff, utter fluff next. Outlined last night. Because I just can't go a day without writing something, apparently.
It's funny. Lots of people read into it what they want/see/fear, but I see Sam as loving, protective, but self-centered. Many readers commented on Sam's selfishness in this fic, but I'm pretty good with it. There's lots of evidence in canon that this is what's up. And I'm largely a canon writer.
Thanks again!
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Lovely good insane! ;-P
And I will definitely let you know what I think. Just need to get past some of the tests tomorrow and I'm golden!
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*buffs them against shirt*
Why, thanks.
*realizes that she's got sticky jam on nails, now on shirt*
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I swear, I have Deep Thoughts. Honest. They revolve around Toad, and John, and cell phones, and video tapes, and sacrifices and letting go.
But, you know, too flaily to get them out.
So, instead, FLAIL.
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And that's the whole of my review.
Oh.
Oh, Sam.
Oh, Dean.
Oh, John, you utter and total and complete.....
Oh, thank the CW there's a new episode tonight because my God this fic kept me and held my heart through that damned hiatus and I can't believe this story is done and wow and oh.
But I think I'm going back to watch Crossroad before 9pm, though.
Fluff, you say?
Cheeryshinycool.
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Yeah, utter fluff coming up next. I promised Tabaqui.
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