SPN fic: Dazzleland 10/10

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Chapter 10/Over, Over, Over

Destination: Niagara Falls, of course. Gen, PG-13. Complete. Horror/drama. A smidgen of angst. A big freakin’ smidgen of angst.

Travel Advisory: High body count. Blood. General wretchedness. Unforgivably wordy.

Cabin Crew: I never leave home without them -- jmm0001and Lemmypie. They make sure I have the right

Comments

[scarlet_avatar]

First comment!

Ok so - this was just amazing. I am incoherent and just flailing about. That was intense and messy and not everything was ok at the end but realistically when do things ever tie up neatly?

I'll comment later with more feedback when my verbal skills come back but yeah: WOW.

[big_pink]

Dude! You totally got first comment! I hadn't even finished posting at the Pit and I saw it had come in and did my spastic flappy dance.

[scarlet_avatar]

I did didn't i?

I hadn't even finished posting at the Pit and I saw it had come in and did my spastic flappy dance.

I aim to please cause i am just that awesome! No seriously you deserve all the comments you get. This was an fantastic end to a truly fantastic fic. You really get Sam and Dean and their messy, intense but so damn loving relationship. They hurt each other so much but they love each other more than that and that really comes across here.

“It must have been shit, left with him. After.”

“It wasn’t being left with him, you fucking moron. Shit. Any day of the week I’d have done that. That wasn’t it.”You hit the damn nail on the head. I think a surprising number of people don't realize that Dean doesn't regret staying with his dad. Now they (and Sam) know

[big_pink]

Competent!Dean is so hot. I think the most fun I ever had with that was in Old Rebel Yeller when he was making bullets. Had to take a shower, really. LOL.

Fluff, utter fluff next. Outlined last night. Because I just can't go a day without writing something, apparently.

It's funny. Lots of people read into it what they want/see/fear, but I see Sam as loving, protective, but self-centered. Many readers commented on Sam's selfishness in this fic, but I'm pretty good with it. There's lots of evidence in canon that this is what's up. And I'm largely a canon writer.

Thanks again!

[elanurel]

Congrats on finishing it! I am horribly behind due to RL right now, but I promise I'm catching up soon. Just wanted to let you know I hadn't forgotten it.

[big_pink]

I know, this last one was a bitch to write as well -- all sorts of messy things to figure out, and we're trying to buy a house right now in RL and things are just INSANE. But good, insane, you know? Just...crazy! Let me know what you think when RL lets you look in the rear view mirror!

[elanurel]

and we're trying to buy a house right now in RL and things are just INSANE. But good, insane, you know?

Lovely good insane! ;-P

And I will definitely let you know what I think. Just need to get past some of the tests tomorrow and I'm golden!

[zelost_mind]

Goddamn. Hell of a story, lady.

[big_pink]

*huffs on nails*

*buffs them against shirt*

Why, thanks.

*realizes that she's got sticky jam on nails, now on shirt*

[minim_calibre]

Oh, yes!

I swear, I have Deep Thoughts. Honest. They revolve around Toad, and John, and cell phones, and video tapes, and sacrifices and letting go.

But, you know, too flaily to get them out.

So, instead, FLAIL.

[big_pink]

I know you have deep thots. You are a deep thots kinda gal. And flaily too, apparently. Cell phones and video tapes...too obvious? Oh well! Done!

[heidi8]

Oh.

And that's the whole of my review.

Oh.

Oh, Sam.

Oh, Dean.

Oh, John, you utter and total and complete.....

Oh, thank the CW there's a new episode tonight because my God this fic kept me and held my heart through that damned hiatus and I can't believe this story is done and wow and oh.

But I think I'm going back to watch Crossroad before 9pm, though.

Fluff, you say?

Cheeryshinycool.

[big_pink]

Jeezus. I don't know HOW many times I watched CB and C writing this. And go back and watch Bugs, too. (honest -- it makes it bearable).

Yeah, utter fluff coming up next. I promised Tabaqui.